Reviews for Intertwined by Alon

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Mona (Chapter 15) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Nice, I like how you planted a little seed of jealousy there.  I wonder if that will happen to Sesshoumaru when he sees her and Hiro at the festival together, possibly cuddled up together.

p.s. Please update soon.


roberta. (Chapter 14) - Wed 04 Nov 2015

Aw a puppy.


hana sora (Chapter 14) - Wed 04 Nov 2015

They just didnt realize it. . Aw cute


Mona (Chapter 14) - Wed 04 Nov 2015

I love how you are developing this story, their relationship is blossoming without them knowing it.  I hope you can update again soon.

p.s. I would be nice is the chapters were longer but if not it is still worth the wait.

p.s.s Are their parents still alive?  Wil Shippo and Rin make an appearance?, love those adorable kids


hana sora (Chapter 13) - Wed 04 Nov 2015

 

Keep it coming!!


Mona (Chapter 13) - Wed 04 Nov 2015

Great!!! I will be waiting on the next update.


Anon. (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Nov 2015

Hiro from Melancholy! <33


hana sora (Chapter 11) - Tue 03 Nov 2015

Kagome is way better and sesshy to much better than inu


Nicka (Chapter 11) - Tue 03 Nov 2015

They are just too cute for words.


roberta. (Chapter 10) - Tue 03 Nov 2015

Great chap funny


Saiya (Chapter 10) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

So Adorbs


Mona (Chapter 10) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

Nice, I am hoping an update comes soon.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 10) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

Interesting 


roberta. (Chapter 6) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

This is an interesting story. Like it see you next time.


Harleypool (Chapter 9) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

*dies laughing* can't even! :'-D


That'sjustit (Chapter 8) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

I hardly ever leave reviews but I feel like this story has got that "something special"

looking forward to the next installments. 


Adomani (Chapter 8) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

I'll be waiting for more!!!


kagomesirene (Chapter 6) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

Well...mission accomplished!...everyone should go their way now that they don' t one another anymore XD XD XD


kagomesirene (Chapter 5) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

OMG...had to laugh so hard...."your face is simple!"  XD :3


kagomesirene (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

Waaaaaaail...liked the long her better as well  :3


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