Reviews for Intertwined by Alon

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Susy V (Chapter 23) - Mon 09 Nov 2015

And the exploration of feelings begin!


roberta. (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Nov 2015

Great


Adomani (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Nov 2015

don't repress yourself! ;)


Susy V (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Nov 2015

Ugh!!! I'm seriously in the edge of my seat! I'm like, will they find them selves wanting to be around each other more? Will InuYasha blow it and do something dumb and have Sesshoumaru blow his mask? Will Sesshoumaru do something for Kikyo to say the wrong thing and him re-analyzing why he wanted her in the first place... You got me thinking up a storm here! And I bet you I'm not even close. PLEASE UPDATE! ... Again. 

 

Hehehe. I love this story! 


LadyFugue (Chapter 21) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

More! Lol, I'm loving how they are developing! 


roberta. (Chapter 21) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

Now we are getting somewhere.


Mona (Chapter 21) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

Great update, looking forward to the next chapter and read what happlens next and/or what happened in their absence.


Samantha (Chapter 21) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

Ohhhh maaannnnnn!!!! I wish the chapters were longer!!!????????????????????????????* insert adult tantrum here* please update soon!!!!

 


LadyFugue (Chapter 20) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

More please! 


Anon. (Chapter 20) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

I love how they exchange just facial expressions to understand one another! <3


roberta. (Chapter 19) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Good update


Mona (Chapter 19) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Nice, I like how he has this bit of fear and surprised at the thought of not sensing someone.  Power afterall is his main goal. 

Please update again soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Great chapters, keep it coming.


LadyFugue (Chapter 18) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Awwwww.... Adorable. 


roberta. (Chapter 17) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

Sassy is starting to see his mistake.


Mona (Chapter 17) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

Short but nice, I hope you can update again soon.


Saiya (Chapter 16) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Shes right that is a GutBuster.


Mona (Chapter 16) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Lol I was thinking about from the beginning, how he is a cat that can't catch a fish, nice update.  I will be waiting for the next chapter and the others to come.


Mona (Chapter 16) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Lol I was thinking about from the beginning, how he is a cat that can't catch a fish, nice update.  I will be waiting for the next chapter and the others to come.


LadyFugue (Chapter 15) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Hahaha! They are unknowingly falling for each other! I'm loving this! 


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