Reviews for Intertwined by Alon

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Redleopord (Chapter 45) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

You gooooooo Hiro!!!! About freakin time!! You tell him kitty! LOL!!!!!!


LadyFugue (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Nooooo!!!!! The cliffhanger of doom!! Please continue  :) 


Susy V (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Oh!!! It's getting super good!


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

KYAAAAAAA!!!OMG, Hiro is about to spoll the beans to Sesshy!!! I wonder how that'll go!!! 

Great Story BTW, I've never been fan of brabbles, but this one, I can't get enough of!!! Keep up the amazing job!!


Karichan (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Oh this story has been getting into my feels!!  I love tension in this with youg love and the choices they make. Keep it up you awesome writer!


Didie (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Well... what is it exactly.... 'beyond painful'? *widest grin*  ^<-------->^

 


hana sora (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Please dont be so cruel to both of them


Nicka (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Nov 2015

Yes, He is going to tell it, please let him, oh please oh please!!!!


Didie (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

Ohooo.... Rain and Sesshoumaru! Very classic and classy coice! O love thid kind of plot, 'chase me, I catch you'... *smirk*


Saiya (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

Aawwww


Fyrelilly (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

I appreciate the two chapters a day.  It's because of that, I find myself checking in a little more than normal.   Thank you! 


Susy V (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

If I could have emojis on here, they'd be all >_____< 


Silverblossom (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

aww this is so heartbreaking </3 both of them fell for each other but neither one is able to admit it to themselves let alone each other..:'( nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one.


ofelia largadas (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

your not alone marie,  i am quite acting the way you do wiahing the next chapters will be longer omg... i just wish.....

 

but thank you for this chaptr and the beautiful story...


roberta. (Chapter 43) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

OK sesshy start to think time is running out.


Marie (Chapter 42) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

Okay these short chapters are killing me. How about you give me a couple chapters so I don't want to pull my hair looking for the next chapter every 5 minutes


Inuaddict (Chapter 42) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

Gosh I wish these chapters werent so short. ITS BLOODY AMAZING. I cannot survive on two chapters a day honeslty


actrivi (Chapter 42) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

So good! Thank you for writing! Keep up the good work :) Can't wait for an update


ofelia largadas (Chapter 42) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

oh my Go!! im always on cliffhanger!!!, i would like to make a request can you pls make the chapters of this story longer ? please?????

thanks a lot!!!!


Silverblossom (Chapter 42) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

Oh now we are getting somewhere. :) nice update.


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