Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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RedDestiny92 (Chapter 26) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

I like how it's going, I want to see them come back together if that happens, I'm all for the drama and hanging around that's the fun of it.


mary (Chapter 25) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Kagome seems so weak, i dunno -_-

 


Adomani (Chapter 25) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

I still like it, do not abandon this, just try to make it more at your like. It is your story, you can do whatever you want. If you want to make them suffer 'till death, do it, I will read it anyways xd

 

take care and be well!!


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Okay,  so I read that someone asked what Kagome would be fighting for ? I think that person that meant to fight for Sesshomaru and therefore fight for happiness.  Obviously I thought it'd be useless since he asked for something so selfish. Maybe .. I mean maybe if Kagome told him how she felt and out right said she'd leave and act as if he would not exist to her he'd be in the complete wrong if he went through with the marriage.  That's a huge maybe... I mean how the heck do you ask someone to be your mistress when you know she'd thought your relationship was so much more .. I'm sort of conflicted with how the story is going.  I can see Sesshomaru and Kagome discussing what and why he doesn't remember everything.  But how would he make an informed decision from pictures ... he doesn't exactly strIke me to go on blind faith .. I can feel the angst coming and almost hope it's not so much where it completely makes me crazy with how things progress.  Excuse my drivel .. can't wait for the next update.


Twizzlersevilbitch (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

I love reading this kind of story that pulls my emotions in different ways. It keeps me begging for more and always wondering and hoping for what's next. Can't wait to see what'll happen next! 


Mona (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

Great, I hope you can update again soon.


Jcdbunny (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

Love this story! I hope kagome and sesshomaru get a happy ending 


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

More!!!


Anonymous (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

I know another reviewer said Kagome should have fought but fought for what? Kagome gave Sesshomaru an ultimatim, he made his decision and it wasn't Kagome. What is there to fight for? A place at Sesshomaru's side no matter who she has to share him with or watch him have kids with? Is that what she has come to? So desperate for him to glance her way that she will do anything to have him? I actually am starting to hate Kagome, which is surprising because I started off being very sympathetic towards her in the beginning. As far as Sesshomaru, I'm very apathetic towards. I appreciate you taking into consideration our reviews, I'm just baffled at Kagome's thought process and disappointed she keeps blaming herself for Sesshomaru's choice. Judging from your AN I assume your end goal will be to have them get back together (after the angst and whatnot) - I'm not sure how I feel about this, I don't like leaving these kinds of reviews and I know if I continud to read I will have intense emotions about the story but I feel compelled to read, and I would like to see how everything plays out regardless of the outcome. 

I hope you don't feel as if because the story isn't going the way I envision I am threatening to stop reading, I've gotten really emotionally invested into stories before but never like this!

On a positive note, I feel as if you incorporated some of the suggestions in reviews very nicely into your story in a believable manner!


Glxydragon (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

Ugh. Always with the evil cliffy.  Looking forward to the next chapter. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

hana sora (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Nov 2015

They deserve some happiness.

Maybe you can make kagome forget instead of sesshy. . He is the one that just need an effort to make kagome loves him again

 

 


Zyren (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

I'm confused. What did she expect him to remember? She wiped his memory, did she think it was temporary? That he would welcome her with open arms? I feel really bad for her but she was the one who decided that was the way to go. Maybe if he hears it from someone else or sees pictures of them together. Also will we find out who burned down the shop? Obviously it was done on purpose and I know who I suspect but will Kagome and Sesshoumaru find out? Maybe that will give him reason to believe that they were something more and someone tried to drive them apart.


Mona (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Nice update, I can't wait to read more.


Anonymous (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

I'm in agreement with others, the story has become very angsty (which I expected) so I have to kind of skim over the chapters to get this gist of what is going on. If I actually read it I would get too emotionally invested in it and with where it seems to be going I just would rather not. I hope that's not an insult, you're still a remarkably good author; I still feel compelled to check how the story is progressing. I'm just frustrated with how weak and insipid Kagome is, I feel like her being upset that she doesn't have a relationship with Sesshomaru is getting old - I don't want them to be together, regardless of some grand epiphany he has had, but at this point if it would get her to shut up and stop crying about it then I'm for it. That sounds so harsh and I'm very sorry! I understand this is your story and you're free to write the characters however you see fit, I just need to vent haha. I also agree with the other reviewer who said that Kagome had to make a serious decision with no time to really consider the consequences and Inuyasha provoking and blaming her if she didn't go through with it, it really put her in a tough position that I don't think Inuyasha understands or appreciates. I also feel as if Inuyasha is trying to be portrayed as the voice of reason (you "love" each other so be together sort of attitude) but he is just striking me as another Sesshomaru in a sense, doesn't see beyond what he thinks is right or take others into consideration - thinks you can just snap your fingers and it will go back to being good, doesn't understand that sometimes the damage is done - regardless of what happens after the fact. I feel as if we (the readers) were supposed to be Inuyasha shaking Kagome and trying to convince Kagome to make a decision and save Sesshomaru because of what Sesshomaru did for her - I'm happy Kagome saved him, he deserved that, but it kind of disconnected me from the story to have Kagome guilt tripped about the whole thing. Ugh, just wish Kagome could stand behind her decision - she did the best she could with what she had and either get over her feelings of Sesshomaru (preferably, there is just too much water under the bridge and he has a kid - to marry her was one thing but he had a child with her) or just go back with him (again, at this point whatever it takes to get her to develop beyond the broken record of crying over him). I want Sesshomaru's wife and father to be found out but regardless of their scheming Sesshomaru made a choice, I feel like it all needs to come out in the wash but I think it's going to be a convenient excuse for Kagome and Sesshomaru to blame their failed relationship on other people instead of just admitting the truth that regardless of how you spin it, there were more important things to Sesshomaru. I guess I'm still clinging to the desire of wanting to see Kagome move on and be happy without him and he will have to live with the consequences of his actions, sadly I don't think the story is headed that way. I would also like to see Kagome have someone to defend her, not support her (and seeing her rely on her younger workers so much is actually lowering her in my eyes, making her appear weaker. I understand they are friends but I personally feel it's making Kagome seem immature the extent to which she just breaks down for her younger friends to constantly have to fix) but defend her like Inuyasha did for Sesshomaru. You have great writing that invokes intense feelings, please don't feel as if some of my feelings reflect the quality of your story or the ability of you as an author - regardless how this story ends I think you've done a fantastic job with it.

 

 

 

 


Blommie8 (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Blommie8 (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Blommie8 (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Blommie8 (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Ree-san (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

This is what Kagome picked out for him. Really hope Hiro doesn't get more into Kagome. That wouldn't end well. How did she think he'd respond to her saying that before explaining what happened with the curse? He would think she's delusional with no explanation.  Is she trying to avoid telling him that she messed up his memories of his life to make stuff easier? Will so enjoy seeing him take down his wife and dad! I want to know what happens to him but I kno your focus is on her.

 

 


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