Honestly sweetheart, I personally don't mind that she's a mess at this point in the story. Situations akin to this are messy
and there is no right way to feel. She made a selfless/selfish choice, but understandably so. Asking someone to not only
let, but also watch the person they love die is an unreasonable request. And as for her not confessing her obvious feelings
before now, at this terribly inconvenient time, I see it as a scar that had nerve damage(sorry for the imagery). But it's a
weakpoint for her and she doesn't willing want to touch it and feel the lingering pain, it's easier to pretend it's not there. Its
like a breakup that just won't end; there's no closure, no healing point. There's just pain that she can either relive or stifle.
I really love this story, it's so sad in such a beautiful way. My only negative comment is that if he somehow falls for her a
second time, without his memories or any external intervention, it's going to feel like a cop-out..like a forced happy ending.
But other than that, everything is great <3
Update soon!
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