Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Debra (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

Sounds like Sesshoumaru's wife is trying to get rid of her, cuz that doesn't sound like a normal fire.


xDori (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

oh nooooooo! i hope Kagome is going to be okay. she made it this far only to burn... glorious retribution is in order i say. lol. can't wait for the next update.

 


Mona (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

More please, it's obvious someone put a flame curse on her cafe' and herself, wonder who, the wife or someone from the Western kingdom.


whodunnit (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

Toss up if it's Sesshomaru's wife or his father responsible for the fire. I'm leaning more towards his dad being responsible, I mean, look at what he did to his own son and his wife hasn't done anything aggressive or harmful towards Kagome before despite everything. At this point, killing Kagome off would be a much more personally satisfying outcome than having her go back with Sesshomaru. I wonder what is going to happen with the ring, I believe it was still in the plant the last time it was mentioned!


hana sora (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

I think, wI know who did it. . Its akemi. . That bastard!!


Ree-san (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

So not liking his dad! How long before he thinks someone notices that he hasn't been seen for months? I also think Inuyasha acting like he's in charge when he doesn't know what the hell he's doing could effect the stock. 

Maybe now this will help Kagome understand that his life isn't as simple as she assumed. I really feel like she doesn't understand him and didn't really try to. 

I assumed at some point she would lash out at Kagome. Could he possibly feel her being close to death and waken his beast enough to escape to save her? I think it would be awesome if he did. He needs to challenge his dad as his alpha. Alphas should at least be interested in the well-being of those in their pack. Perhaps a peak into that interaction?

I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do with this.


Jcdbunny (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

oh no! dose this story have a sad ending? If so I think it will break my heart


Blommie8 (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

Glxydragon (Chapter 17) - Sun 25 Oct 2015

That was an evil cliffy. Can't wait for the next update. 


hana sora (Chapter 16) - Sat 24 Oct 2015

Nobody perfect and sesshy too. . I hope she will understand! Love yaa keep it coming!!


Blommie8 (Chapter 16) - Sat 24 Oct 2015

bella granger (Chapter 16) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

Okay, lots happened since I've been away. After reading what I've missed twice , I can say that I'm somewhat annoyed with Sesshomaru. Yes, he's breaking up with his wife supposedly for himself to finally be "free" but he made that choice and asked Kagome to be his mistress so he could have his company that came with a wife  but also a lover on the side. I can't accept Kagome being remotely happy about Sesshomaru pursuing her again, because of what he did. I'm sort of feeding off of the bitterness I feel Kagome had when seeing Sesshomaru again. Trust is hard to build, easy to break and difficult to gain once broken and I think it'll take Kagome building a life for herself with a completely new love interest and Sesshomaru truly agonizing over Kagome for there to be any chance of progress. Meh but this is just me ranting , so thank you thank you for updating!  


kagomesirene (Chapter 16) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

I really liked this chapter...like i said before...regret is part of life and really; Sesshoumaru is lucky to be able to change his life...because even if he looses his company or shares or whatever, i'm sure he still ownes more than most people...and regarding Isamu...he card for him when his wife left for the US, he has no affair with Kagome and never abused his wife,,,he's been honest with her from the start..so i don't see a judge taking Isamu away...well...we'll see...keep up the good work :3


Debra (Chapter 16) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

Glad he says he is leaving her for himself, since she is right and he didn't choose Kagome when he should have. Though he really should leave if he isn't happy. I don't think him and Kagome are anywhere near ready to get back into a relationship with all the issues they have to work out, but at least he'll be single. The time he has been spending with her so far has been highly inappropriate for a married family man, spending time with an ex-lover and taking is son along, just wrong.

Also loving the duo handling things for Kagome. It's so sweet how much they both love her in different ways, you have to love them both.

Anyway I'm still loving the story!


Jcdbunny (Chapter 16) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

Poor kagome, im so confused about how I feel about sesshomaru's character I love that he loves kagome completely, but hate how their relationship ended up 


Mona (Chapter 16) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

It was great, can't wait to read more and I hope the ending is a good one.


RedDestiny92 (Chapter 16) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

I'm sort of...proud of the fluff master lol, great chapter can't wait to see more.


hana sora (Chapter 15) - Fri 23 Oct 2015

 

Update as soon as possible,.i love it yey


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Thu 22 Oct 2015

Adomani (Chapter 15) - Thu 22 Oct 2015

OMG.

Why so sadness )': why do we have to wait to another chapter? Why so mean? Why can't you give us more today?


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