I don't think she ever really considers what he wants, it's more of what she wants and he agrees to make her happy. It's ironic that she instantly wants him to process that his friends are dead but she's still running from her family despite what's happening with them.
In the anime it's implied that she won't age. I would like to love this story but it's being set up for him to watch her die and truly be alone. Not sure how I feel about the possible crushing tragedy....
Koree (Chapter 21) - Sat 14 Nov 2015
:( poor mama , lol a jealous Sesshomaru is great
Ashatan (Chapter 21) - Tue 10 Nov 2015
You've got me very intrigued by this story. I hope that there are more happy and intimate moments for Sesshy and Kags! I hope Kags mom is better! Also I would like to know if they do go back to Japan!!!
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Saiya (Chapter 21) - Mon 09 Nov 2015
That was Exciteing and Sad yet hopeful all in one
Ana (Chapter 21) - Sun 08 Nov 2015
I don't like Kagome's indifference toward his family, specially his mother. You are portrain her: selfish, insecure (she is afraid of everything except losing Seshoumaru) and inmature. That is not something she was in the Feudal Era, that is not of her original character.
Yay! I love your updates!
| Hi there, just wanted to say that you're on my list of fave stories. First person point of view stories rarely work well in fanfics for me, but you've managed to pull it off superbly here. Loving the interactions and how you've paced it - not too fast and believable. Especially with the slow and measured revelations about his past life by Sesshoumaru.
I look forward to reading more updates in time to come. Keep it up!
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