Hello, I would like to leave a review of your story so far. The prose of this tale is beautifully written, the storyline has its whimsy but also a very down to earth feel. The idea od Sesshoumaru being stripper in Las Vegas is new and refreshing take on a modern day reality. He is not a an executive at a large company that he subsequently owns (No Shade), he is a stripper in America no less. I think that facet of the story itself has the potential to create great character development as well as maintain much of the character's original original original.  The tone that you write the characters in reflects very well on your understanding of the passage of time and the many ways that people face it. Kagome's more sombre attitude and self-reflective personality that longs to be the young girl who traveled the feudal era is beautifully written. I can feel though the way the character's interact that they both miss those times for different reasons but it creates a connection that I think will enhance not only the characters as you write them but the present thy live in as well. Inserting your own OCs makes their new world more believable and understandale in the context of the story. Mel's overbearing character is almost reminiscent of a younger Kagome, all loud gestures and an unwillingness to compromise. I love the interactions between Kagome and Sesshoumaru in these past couple chapters. I think it comes back to the idea that they both recognize that time has passed and that they have changed as individuals but they bring out something from the feudal era in each other. I think the comfort that they give each other has a lot to do with time and how they seem to exist outside of it together and alone. Sorry, this was a ramble but I really appreciate your writing and this story. 

Best Of Luck,

Maya

I'm loving the story. I will admit though, that kagome continuing to see inuyasha when she sigh sesshou, makes me really unhappy. She is inuyasha riggt now ????

Awww that really made me want to cry

That was sweet and sad

next chapter please