Whoops! So far, very cute and interesting.
I love where this is going, why did I hesitate? Poor Sesshomaru, but I'm loving the introspection he's having.
VS (Chapter 60) - Mon 05 Nov 2018
That sounds to me like Sesshoumaru is offering ^^. Nice update. I can't wait to read when Kagome will meet Sesshoumaru's body. :)
This is getting good. You have also answered a lot of my questions. Sesshomaru feeling broken without his soul is something kagome can relate deeply relate to. I wonder if jaken is still in the cave or will there be some hilarious moments to come? How will they switch bodies? Perhaps some research in sesshomaru's library or perhaps bokseno-sama but that would mean telling someone else about this incident. I'm looking forward to seeing jaken in his new body.
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
I love this, I am glad you're writing it and letting us read it!
VS (Chapter 57) - Tue 23 Oct 2018
Hello,
that is a question I thought about too. I mean, did the beast even leave Sesshoumaru's body? Or has Jaken to deal with it now? That would be really interesting!!! :P
You created a really nice and funny story here! And I can't wait to read what is to come!
I quite like this story :). I like the premise and thought of Sesshoumaru trying to look dignified in little Jaken’s body lol. Can’t wait for them to meet up with Jaken!
Kat (Chapter 52) - Mon 08 Oct 2018
Well I for one did I miss you. This story is bright and fun.
I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD
' not interesting'? You think this story is ' not interesting'? ?
... Are you crazy?
I LOVE this story! I find it MAJORLY 'interesting'! OXD
Um, what about Sango? I know she's a little busy with her kids, so she wouldn't be able to help, but shouldn't she still be considered pack?
JoLynn (Chapter 51) - Tue 10 Jul 2018
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Please don't ever give up!
Funny, original and great visuals provided; I'm deeply amused. Quick beta edit; your spelling looks great so far, save for mistery in previous chapter. Edit to Mystery :)
Thank you for the laugh, I look forward to continuing my read
Violla (Chapter 47) - Thu 28 Jul 2016
Spero che aggiorni al piu prestò bellissima storia.
Deana (Chapter 47) - Fri 13 May 2016
Awesome story! Love that Jaken and Sesshoumaru switched bodies maybe he'll gain a little respect for the imp. I'm pretty sure that Jaken is an imp and not a kappa. Kappas like cucumbers and there is a line in Inuyasha where he states that his mother told him to be a ferryman and not a general. Anyway can't wait for the next update.
Saiya (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016
Poor Fluffy
Interesting story line so far! And you write quite well for having English as a second language! One critique is to pay a little more attention to the past, present and future tenses of verbs as they tend to distract a bit from the meaning of a sentence. For example. She realize .... instead of She realized. Hope that helps! Keep it up! I want to know how this ends! :D
Great, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
There are Angels God put on this Earth Who care for us and guide us. You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us. They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears. They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile. They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child. God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own. She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown. She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her Mother
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