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KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Don’t laugh Kagome...eventually he will get out. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Whoops! So far, very cute and interesting. 


Erica MacKenzie (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

I love where this is going, why did I hesitate? Poor Sesshomaru, but I'm loving the introspection he's having. 


VS (Chapter 60) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

That sounds to me like Sesshoumaru is offering ^^. Nice update. I can't wait to read when Kagome will meet Sesshoumaru's body. :)


princess of the western lands (Chapter 59) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

This is getting good. You have also answered a lot of my questions. Sesshomaru feeling broken without his soul is something kagome can relate deeply relate to. I wonder if jaken is still in the cave or will there be some hilarious moments to come? How will they switch bodies? Perhaps some research in sesshomaru's library or perhaps bokseno-sama but that would mean telling someone else about this incident. I'm looking forward to seeing jaken in his new body.

 

Update soon onegai

Ja ne


Jen kenoha (Chapter 58) - Fri 26 Oct 2018

I love this, I am glad you're writing it and letting us read it!


VS (Chapter 57) - Tue 23 Oct 2018

Hello,

that is a question I thought about too. I mean, did the beast even leave Sesshoumaru's body? Or has Jaken to deal with it now? That would be really interesting!!! :P

You created a really nice and funny story here! And I can't wait to read what is to come!


Eternity1225 (Chapter 56) - Sat 20 Oct 2018

I quite like this story :). I like the premise and thought of Sesshoumaru trying to look dignified in little Jaken’s body lol. Can’t wait for them to meet up with Jaken!


Kat (Chapter 52) - Mon 08 Oct 2018

Well I for one did I miss you. This story is bright and fun.


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 51) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 45) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

' not interesting'? You think this story is ' not interesting'? ?

... Are you crazy?

I LOVE this story! I find it MAJORLY 'interesting'! OXD


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 22) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

Um, what about Sango? I know she's a little busy with her kids, so she wouldn't be able to help, but shouldn't she still be considered pack?


JoLynn (Chapter 51) - Tue 10 Jul 2018

????????????????????????

Please don't ever give up! 


Erica MacKenzie (Chapter 28) - Wed 04 Jul 2018

Funny, original and great visuals provided; I'm deeply amused. Quick beta edit; your spelling looks great so far, save for mistery in previous chapter. Edit to Mystery :)

Thank you for the laugh, I look forward to continuing my read


Violla (Chapter 47) - Thu 28 Jul 2016

Spero che aggiorni  al piu prestò  bellissima  storia.


Deana (Chapter 47) - Fri 13 May 2016

Awesome story! Love that Jaken and Sesshoumaru switched bodies maybe he'll gain a little respect for the imp. I'm pretty sure that Jaken is an imp and not a kappa. Kappas like cucumbers and there is a line in Inuyasha where he states that his mother told him to be a ferryman and not a general. Anyway can't wait for the next update.


Saiya (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

Poor Fluffy


Miss Killington (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

Interesting story line so far! And you write quite well for having English as a second language! One critique is to pay a little more attention to the past, present and future tenses of verbs as they tend to distract a bit from the meaning of a sentence. For example. She realize .... instead of She realized. Hope that helps! Keep it up! I want to know how this ends! :D 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

Great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother


Eva (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

I'm so glad that You didn't give up on this story.it isn't like so many others and that is good.


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