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YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 51) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 45) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

' not interesting'? You think this story is ' not interesting'? ?

... Are you crazy?

I LOVE this story! I find it MAJORLY 'interesting'! OXD


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 22) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

Um, what about Sango? I know she's a little busy with her kids, so she wouldn't be able to help, but shouldn't she still be considered pack?


JoLynn (Chapter 51) - Tue 10 Jul 2018

????????????????????????

Please don't ever give up! 


Erica MacKenzie (Chapter 28) - Wed 04 Jul 2018

Funny, original and great visuals provided; I'm deeply amused. Quick beta edit; your spelling looks great so far, save for mistery in previous chapter. Edit to Mystery :)

Thank you for the laugh, I look forward to continuing my read


Violla (Chapter 47) - Thu 28 Jul 2016

Spero che aggiorni  al piu prestò  bellissima  storia.


Deana (Chapter 47) - Fri 13 May 2016

Awesome story! Love that Jaken and Sesshoumaru switched bodies maybe he'll gain a little respect for the imp. I'm pretty sure that Jaken is an imp and not a kappa. Kappas like cucumbers and there is a line in Inuyasha where he states that his mother told him to be a ferryman and not a general. Anyway can't wait for the next update.


Saiya (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

Poor Fluffy


Miss Killington (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

Interesting story line so far! And you write quite well for having English as a second language! One critique is to pay a little more attention to the past, present and future tenses of verbs as they tend to distract a bit from the meaning of a sentence. For example. She realize .... instead of She realized. Hope that helps! Keep it up! I want to know how this ends! :D 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

Great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother


Eva (Chapter 47) - Wed 11 May 2016

I'm so glad that You didn't give up on this story.it isn't like so many others and that is good.


Saiya (Chapter 44) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

And what fun you will have.


Saiya (Chapter 43) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

Not nothing. Good things come to those who wait!


Saiya (Chapter 42) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

wow she's so Strong


Saiya (Chapter 41) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

Ya Training


Saiya (Chapter 40) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

so exciteing.


Saiya (Chapter 39) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

Ya Dragon


Saiya (Chapter 38) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

Getter Sango


Eva (Chapter 37) - Wed 26 Aug 2015

Kaede always seems to know and understand more than she lets on. Thanks for the update.


Saiya (Chapter 37) - Wed 26 Aug 2015

Thank you so Much for the UpDates It Made my Day i was all like YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.


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