Cañt wait for the next chapter
Wow! This is amazing!
Really enjoying the story.
I'm loving every bit of this story! Mindblowing! Update soon!
Wow, wow, wow! Oh boy please hurry and up date. There was nothing boring about this chapter please update soon
Great story, please update soon and sorry for your loss.
Sorry to hear about your loss. And I'm sure we'll be sorry to hear bout Sesshoumaru's loss if they get Kagome. I am eager to hear about Kagome's dad and what actually happened with him and her mom. Things are heating up. I can't wait to see what happens next and how makes the first move (in all of this) :) Feel better.
The suspense is killing me!!!
Hi!
i really really enjoyed your story and I'm sorry for your loss :( Hope you and your family are alright (and I hope you'll update soon!)
there were 2 inconsistencies that made this chapter very confusing though. Maybe because you've written parts of it at different times and simply forgot:
1. Kagome at the beginning of the chapter says that the kiss and they party was 2 weeks ago. After the flashback, everything says that it happened yesterday...
2. Kagome at the beginning of the story says that she's only known sesshomaru for 3 months. Later sesshomaru berates himself falling for her after knowing her for 4 month....
The passage of time is kind of hard to keep track of and I've read the other chapters a bit too long ago to try and figure out how many months :)
Beyond glad that you've decided to continue the story. I can't believe that alexis would betray kagome but should have seen it coming.
I am alsl very sorry for you loss! :(
I am so sorry for your loss, this story and your fans will still be here, take your time. You're doing beautifully, I'm loving it's. I hope everything goes better for you!
I'm sorry for your loss , sending prayers to you & your family . As for the chap , another amazing chap :)
Damn, damn, damn and damn some more. What the @(%&#! And I don't have a choice but to wait for an update. Double damn!
Is it because they're soul mates or something? That seems more likely than she's a demon to me, but maybe that's open too used? Hope to see another update soon!
What's up with the weird and creepy placement of a story in the review? So not ok. Hope that crap can be deleted. Not the place for self promotion and very unfair to you.
I'm so sorry about your loss. But the chapterm was really good, I was all exciting and thinking to myself "hey maybe this story won't have a huge enemy threat and put in Naraku or anything". Sigh.
First of all, let me say that I'm sorry for your loss. Thank you for the chapter! I'm bummed that not only Kagome is being targeted, but it'll be in the form of a betrayal from a "friend"
Omg. I enjoyed this. I can't wait for the next chapter
Awww looks like someone is getting a kiss next chap
Please sir, I want some more and nobody likes a tease :) Ahh... they both are realizing there's more there. I wonder how long it will take them to actually act on it and even let the other know. I feel like Sesshoumaru will break down first. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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