i really really enjoyed your story and I'm sorry for your loss :( Hope you and your family are alright (and I hope you'll update soon!)
there were 2 inconsistencies that made this chapter very confusing though. Maybe because you've written parts of it at different times and simply forgot:
1. Kagome at the beginning of the chapter says that the kiss and they party was 2 weeks ago. After the flashback, everything says that it happened yesterday...
2. Kagome at the beginning of the story says that she's only known sesshomaru for 3 months. Later sesshomaru berates himself falling for her after knowing her for 4 month....
The passage of time is kind of hard to keep track of and I've read the other chapters a bit too long ago to try and figure out how many months :)
Beyond glad that you've decided to continue the story. I can't believe that alexis would betray kagome but should have seen it coming.
I am alsl very sorry for you loss! :(
I am so sorry for your loss, this story and your fans will still be here, take your time. You're doing beautifully, I'm loving it's. I hope everything goes better for you!
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