Oh! And on a related note, I loved the historical element of this war. I don't know where the references to World War 2 are but this stayed very much within World War 1. I am interested to see where we visit in history next and if you do cover World War 2, how that will go because I recall that the Japanese don't win that one. Or will fate tinker with that as well?  Ah! So much to think about until the next chapter comes out!

I'm fascinated.

Actually I'm fan girling about how Sesshomaru managed to end a four year war in two years for her. If that's not a testimony of love, Kagome is a lunatic! And on the same note, this is fate- had Kagome not gotten captured, Sesshomaru would not have felt as compelled to resolve the issue as fast and our villian (whom I'm strangely straddling the line between sympathy and righteous anger for) would have had enough time to gather enough energy to wipe out all the demons. Fate has taken these factors into consideration clearly by putting our Kagome in the cruel predicament she was forced to endure. Not only that but by having Kagome be taken, she saved those demons despite a few casualties  including those on her vessel in the previous chapters.  There are some other things worth mentioning about how this plot line is so well braided, but I think that's illistrated that in those few scenes. 

Honestly, I have to thank you as an author for weaving so well. Even if I'm completely wrong, I know you've made a better reader out of me by calling so much attention to detail in your story, but not so much that I'm overwhelmed and feel as though I'm missing everything scrutinizing little things all the time. You're showing there are no such things as little things and you're growing these characters out of thier molds. Leaving questions like, how do they move on from this, where is this going, what will be left.

Once again, absolutely fascinated and transfixed on your soonest update.

Oh my gosh please please please write the next chapter (14) sooner!! lols I love this story and you as a writer, you're amazing.

uh oh...Sesshoumaru is going to be a combination of pissed, freaked, panicked. Probably so many things. Hopefully he doesn't kill all the youkai she just saved (for not helping her). That would be a waste. I can't wait to see what happens next now that Kagome is finally found :) (Cause obviously she is going to survive!)

D; Kagomeeeeeeeee ! It Sucks To See Everyone Just Turn Their Backs On Her After All She's Done . Even If She's A Miko & Her Power Was Used Against Them . Great Chap :) Sesshomaru Finally Found Her But Not How He Wanted

Nooooo!! Nonono! ????

Nooo you can't just end it there. Oh god why!? Please please update. I need more!!!

Hawwwww hawwww chapter ended T_T anyways nice chapter as in at least sesshomaru found her 

What a very interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to reading more! 

I'm am absolutely   heart broken.  I don't know how to feel about this chapter always within arms reach only to yanked  away.  That's a horrible feeling.  I look forward to an update.

Sh*t, sh*t, sheeeee-it!!!! This was one hell of an update! Loved the part when the General tore through Kagome's back with his claws, exposing bits of her spinal cord! That was nicely written!  Now Sesshomaru has finally been reunited with his miko, however she's at the brink of death. Oooooooooooooog sh*t! 

Oh my! That was hard to read. Plesae let Sesshomaru catch that evil creep Yamamoto and force him to clear Kagome's name. My heart broke when Kagome reveled her powers to others then again when no one helped her. I love your other stories and can't wait till the next chapter.

Really enjoying the story so far. I hope you will keep writing until the end of the story.

Nooooooooooo! ! How could you leave it there. 

Please update soon, I love this fanfic and can't wait to read more.

Oh. My. God.

Oooo....another great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next

the fuuuuuck?!?!! ya, why it had to happen?! oh kags, please, you couldn't die~ T,T

i can't wait for the next chapter~

Yay he found her! Now Sess can fix her up and cuddle xD

Hope to read more soon!

I'm torn knowing there is no rest or reward for our heroine and there is so much more grief for her to live through. I'm completely captivated by the journey though.