I liked the story so far but I think you should cut Sesshoumaru some slack. She never responds to him and he just ends up heart. I get that she doesn't want to tell him things that affect her future and her inability to be with him but at this point I think the interactions are just becoming cruel and unfair to both characters.
Great chapters, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
M- is the million things she gave me. O- means only that she's growing old. T- is for the tears shed to save me. H- is for her heart of purest gold. E- is for her eyes, with love & light shining. R- means right, and right she'll always be.
Happy Mother's Day!
Oh my gosh that was just so sad....
This is just so sad! They just needed a little more time together. Bout to start bawling here. If course sesshoumaru will change. He's gonna force himself to. But he's not gonna get over her. He's probably gonna have a mate next time and then be stuck between a rock and a hard place. Ugh. Amazing job writing. I'm so invested in your story now but i don't wanna be one of those dicks who just keep begging for a chapter.........
Oh My Goodness!! Such a cliffhanger! He saves her and gets run through! This is So Good! One of the best fics I've read. Thanks so much for a lovely read!
Another beautiful chapter. This story is breath taking. Hopeful and yet sweetly sad. Thanks so much.
I loved this chapter. So sad that Rin doesn't have any descendents. No little Rin look a likes to chase after Sessh. This is so nicely done. Thanks.
Desje (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2015
This is so good, such strong characters and determination. I feel for Sesh, "tear*tear"
Caith sidhe (Chapter 13) - Wed 27 May 2015
Your story is awesome, I enjoy it very much. It is well researched and that is something I adore. Up to this chapter there was just a bit of confusion concerning the word 'Kaiser'. You useit like the rather common german surname not like the former german ruler's title. I assumed you refered to some high ranking officer named Kaiser until I read the scene at the camp's gate. The title is never used without the article or the given name. For example: The Kaiser at the time of WWI was Kaiser Wilhelm II. His name was Friedrich Wilhelm Viktor Albrecht von Preussen (Frederick William Victor Albert of Prussia). Even at that time there where a lot of commoners called Wilhelm Kaiser, one of them was a famous baseball pitcher (:-). They would be called Kaiser or Mr. Kaiser. I hope you don't mind, that I pointed it out. Your story is really great and you are a talented writer. Keep on the good work.
I'm always afraid to comment as it seems whenever I do the author discontinues the series, but as you say these are cherished... lets hope this is the exception to the rule. Amazing work thus far!
jk (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2015
Plz Plz don't tell me he'll be mated by the next time she comes and that too to Hisa. Seriously can't anybody understand she's kagome if she's hiding the truth its because she doesn't want to burden anyone especially someone she cares about or loves. Plz give her sesshomaru. T_T
nia (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2015
muahahahaha.... T<T why both of them?!!! it's.... ukhh~~~!!!!! maybe the next one world war II?
but whenever the time is, i want them together! it's soooooo frustating to read how both of them locking their loves because the damn quest! akhhh~!!!!!
can't wait for the next chapter~
Jennn (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 May 2015
This is by far the best written and thought out story I have read. You constantly keep me wanting more. I'm so so so excited to see what you have planned!! I can't wait for the next chapter ((:
fallen (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 May 2015
Your story is such a painfully wonderful masterpiece. I have been a silent reader for far too long. My heart hurts for them and while I'm trying to prepare myself for more of the inevitable heartache...I'm somewhere between anxiously awaiting the next installment and have a pit in my stomach dreading what pain and hurt that may be ahead in your tale. Thank you for such a beautiful story, keep up the spectacular work!
There is really not much to say. This chapter tugged at my heart. Of course, lack of communication made for an unfortunate situation. I really wish people realize that sometimes you just need to be direct. Get it out. Don't hold it in to the point where you become emotionally hurt and disturbed, like our two characters here.
But, the realistic part of this is that situations like this happen all the time. Miscommunications and misunderstandings can cause a load of problems that could have been avoided by just speaking your mind. Love, unfortunately, isn't easy.
Once again, I love your writing and truely enjoyed this chapter. I'm sure that there will be more drama to come. I look forward to it.
Great job!
Mona (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 May 2015
I hope you update soon.
Marie (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 May 2015
I knew this chapter was coming but darn it it didn't make it any easier. It can only get worse from this point out. Hisa finally won.. I'm so so sad. I need a kagome redeeming update please.... I just don't know what else to say
northpeach (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 May 2015
*lip trembles*
*eyes watering*
Ugh....why...why must you do this to me?
Have I wronged you in a way I did not notice?
Is it for the purpose of a good story?
For your beloved readers?
Your fingers moving over the keys to form a plotline?
*wipes tears away*
On the other hand this angst moment you have very expertly managed to inbue in the very soul of your story does tell wonders of your writing ability.
*thumbs up*
Caera (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 May 2015
Awww,you left me hanging.I hope you will update soon.
northpeach (Chapter 13) - Wed 20 May 2015
...Gee, thanks you so much Maru-chan. A cliffhanger? On this level. Bravo. Unfortunately my writer's side is amazing and very proud but my reader's side is weeping.
*sighs*
Darn you.
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