loved it thanks.
Well, I am curious to see how Kagome is after that! xD
Nice chapter, slow, but nice xD
Thank you for the update! <3
Melissa (Chapter 7) - Wed 09 Apr 2014
I am really enjoying your storty thank you.
mari (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
really like this story thanks.
Sheila (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
Loved it...update soon, please!
Great, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
awesome chapter!
Chandra (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
This last chapter was incredible!!! Please keep it up!!
Sheila (Chapter 5) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
I'm really liking this story, it's a pleasure to read. Thanks.
samantha (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
Great story you have awesome intellect the sceneary and words stimulated my senses and you kept the characters well in character ;p
Awe man!! Just as Fluffy admits that to himself she denies him. That stinks ! But it just makes it so much more suspenseful! Update soon! I love it!
Those last lines...
Another great chapter! Thank you!
Ana (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014
Uhuhuhuhuh that was really fun to read. Bit i'm sad for inutasha:(hope he gets on it feet quikly!
Thank you for the update<3
Kounami (Chapter 5) - Fri 28 Mar 2014
Yes! Yes! Yes! A thousand times, yes! I LOVE this chapter! And of course, my favorite quote of all "Return to me, Kagome." *insert high-pitched girly squeal*
Emiko (Chapter 1) - Fri 28 Mar 2014
Great start to a story so far! I really like the pace your setting and the storyline. Keep up the good work!! If you don't mind me adding constructive criticism, about the only errors I see are some minor grammatical errors. But please don't focus on it because it doesn't disrupt the flow or distract! As I said, very minor, probably easily overlooked during editting. Beyond that, you have a start on a great thing, so please keep those updates coming!!!! =D
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 Mar 2014
excellent
Ana (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 Mar 2014
Nice chap :D
Thanks for the update! <3
4kagome (Chapter 5) - Fri 21 Mar 2014
Awesome! Please keep the story going!
Very entertaining.
Well written
Great job.
Ana (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Mar 2014
I like it! Well done :D
Thank you for charing it with us! <3
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