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Melissa (Chapter 7) - Wed 09 Apr 2014

I am really enjoying your storty thank you.


mari (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

really like this story thanks.


Sheila (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

Loved it...update soon, please!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

Great, keep it coming.


tonya (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

awesome chapter!


Chandra (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

This last chapter was incredible!!! Please keep it up!!


Sheila (Chapter 5) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

I'm really liking this story, it's a pleasure to read.   Thanks.


samantha (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

Great story you have awesome intellect the sceneary and words stimulated my senses and you kept the characters well in character ;p


Saya Otonashi (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

Awe man!! Just as Fluffy admits that to himself she denies him. That stinks ! But it just makes it so much more suspenseful!  Update soon! I love it!


Neelixonee (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

Those last lines...

 

Another great chapter!  Thank you!


Ana (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

Uhuhuhuhuh that was really fun to read. Bit i'm sad for inutasha:(hope he gets on it feet quikly! 

Thank you for the update<3 


Kounami (Chapter 5) - Fri 28 Mar 2014

Yes! Yes! Yes! A thousand times, yes! I LOVE this chapter! And of course, my favorite quote of all  "Return to me, Kagome." *insert high-pitched girly squeal* 


Emiko (Chapter 1) - Fri 28 Mar 2014

Great start to a story so far! I really like the pace your setting and the storyline. Keep up the good work!! If you don't mind me adding constructive criticism, about the only errors I see are some minor grammatical errors. But please don't focus on it because it doesn't disrupt the flow or distract! As I said, very minor, probably easily overlooked during editting. Beyond that, you have a start on a great thing, so please keep those updates coming!!!! =D


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 Mar 2014

Nice chapter, keep it coming. 


tonya (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 Mar 2014

excellent


Ana (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 Mar 2014

Nice chap :D

Thanks for the update! <3 


4kagome (Chapter 5) - Fri 21 Mar 2014

Awesome!  Please keep the story going! 

 

Very entertaining.

 

Well written

 

Great job.

 


Ana (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Mar 2014

I like it! Well done :D

Thank you for charing it with us! <3


SashaMarie (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Mar 2014

Please update soon, I really love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Tue 18 Mar 2014

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quick. Keep it coming. 


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