everything was deliciously dark and horrific. hmm i loved it, BUT i loved YOUR comment at the end better *dark, evil chuckle*
KAGOME CAN USE TENSEIGA,,,,TO BRING HIM BACK,,,,SHE CAN USE TETSEIGA,,,,INUTASHAS SO WHY NOT TENSEIGA,,,SESSHOUMARUS HEALING SWORD.....BOTH BELONGED TO HIS FATHER,,,AND SHE HAS SESSHOUMARUS POWER RIGHT,,,,,SO YOU CAN MAKE IT WORK OUT.............................PLEASE DONT LET HIM DIE AFTER EVERYTHING THEY WENT THROUGH,,,,,THAT WOULD BE DEPRESSING.............................................................TDANIEL
Kounami (Chapter 17) - Sat 09 Aug 2014
Oh! To be so cruel! How could you leave it at such?! And to KILL Sesshoumaru?! I can't... I just can't! Kagome was an AWESOME force to be reckoned with! I loved her power and her bloodlust! I loved how you didn't drag anything on and how you made the foreshadowing of her power in the previous chapter, shine through to this one. I can't wait until your next update! I really hope there are a few more chapters before this fic is over!
kidswithguns91 (Chapter 16) - Thu 07 Aug 2014
Your imagination holds no bounds. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Of course a typical review would be to plead for an update soon, but I recognize this story requires more than time! I can't wait to read on and know the next will be just as brilliant, or even better!
Kudos x infinity!
I have enjoyed your story so far. The development and flow of the story are wonderfully put together. I cannot wait to read what you have in store next for them. You have a way with words and are able to keep the reader drawn into the story. I appreciate you sharing this.
Nilee1 (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Aug 2014
Dark but so very, very powerful. I eagerly await your next chapter!
Lady Pai (Chapter 16) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
Yes!! Omg I'm loving your writing ability! Please update soon I look forward to future chapters!!
tonya (Chapter 16) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
cant wait for the next update!
mochi (Chapter 15) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
ah that's what that shinzui is all about :) Very cool concept! Love your story!
tonya (Chapter 16) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
great chapter
OMG!! Please please update soon. Sesshomaru, I can't believe it. He needs to be saved now!!
I can't wait for the next chapters. This is getting so good the anticipation of watching Kagome kick butt is almost unbearable.
If you missed episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal you can watch it on youtube. Nice chapter, keep it coming.
Honey, you have nothing to apologize for. I personally love the way Kagome is developing into a cold blooded fighter, like a lioness getting ready to protect her kin!!! I cant wait for the next chapter. Ass kicking Kagome will rock im sure!!!
The more of this I read, the more awesome it gets. Brilliant!!! More, more, MORE PLEASE!!!
whooo! yes! *just imagine a heavy metal song playing in the back ground as kagome walked into the forest (probably metallica-ish. "One")*
Can i just say o m f-ing G! I'm ready for kagome to kick some serious butt! I pretty much read all the chapters in one sitting so now I'm anxious to see the next chapter! Please hurry and post the chapter I want to see shessy get rescued!
Melissa (Chapter 16) - Sun 03 Aug 2014
Just as there is day so also must there be a night.:)
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