I think king harold is being very cheeky, he knows the country just got out of war and wants to exploit them at their time of recovery. However no one backs sesshomaru into a corner. Ever. When he requests the audience with king harold he should kind of play along, then have his high generals kind of appear from the shadows and surround him. Sesshomaru would make explicitly clear not to give him threats and show he still has a strong army that would easily defeat harold and all of his attempts. Or ruin him from the inside out. Also, this could be how sesshomaru sees kagome again and recalls being with her. Meanwhile during the two week gap, he's constantly thinking about the raven hair beauty.
Keep it coming.
Faux66 (Chapter 8) - Mon 24 Mar 2014
This story is amazing I any wait but how can he forget her face if he saw her a few times and held the child...
Oooo, fun!! I'm all for an assasination atempt... and then the fuss dies down and oh, Kagome's pregnant.
Keep up the good work!
I am very confused at this point. Are you rewriting this story but simply adding the rewritten chapters onto what is already posted?
Eliona (Chapter 7) - Sun 23 Mar 2014
Very excited to see whats going to happen next! :D
Sorry but I#m confused by this rewrite.....it seems you left parts as they were...so in chapter 1 Kagome is excited to meet her father and next chapter he's some kinda pervert that lusts after his daughter? ....and everything gets more confusing....it seems that you try to squeeze two stories into one... i dunno why you decided to change yor storyline
Please update soon, loved it.
I really like this story! But how is Kagome a virgin when she has already been with Sessh AND has a child?
mari (Chapter 7) - Sat 22 Mar 2014
great update thanks.
Awesome, keep it coming.
I'm loving this story more and more! I wish you could update more often. But Its wirth the wait since I love it so much! Good job with this chapter.
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