Reviews for Ways of Life by Marimay

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Tilayha (Chapter 17) - Sat 23 May 2020

I was starting to get upset lol. The thought of Amelia being a nice person instead of mean and coniving had me worried until the end. Now the question is..... How is Kagome gonna help her when she finds out Amelia doesnt want to marry Sesshoumaru! Great way to keep me hooked until your very last word.


Zauberer di Vent (Chapter 17) - Sat 23 May 2020

Damn, I can't hate Amelia, she is a víctim in this and is so honest and humble. Wait, Sara is here?! And Naraku is the guard?!

 

Well, at least Kagome's family was nice. Oh, another beautiful pup~


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 17) - Sat 23 May 2020

Great chapter.


SmilingFool (Chapter 17) - Sat 23 May 2020

Wow that did not go as I thought it would.  Whatever happened to Kagome telling her parents that she was pregnant with the Emporors pup?  So why celabrate knowing what will come of it.  What will happen now?  Well the assination atempt has not happened yet on Sesshomaru so I think its safe to say Naraku wasn't ordered to kill him to keep lady amelia to himself.  Why doesn't she work out a plan with Sesshomaru so she can be with Naraku.  Oh well this chapter was really short but at least it was a chapter....   update soon.


Alashia (Chapter 16) - Tue 19 May 2020

This is going to be interesting to see how Kagome will hide this from Sesshoumaru. Definitely not a good ideal to do so but I understand where she's coming from. Please update soon!


SammyJams (Chapter 16) - Tue 19 May 2020

The rewritten chapters were amazing, and this last chapter blew me away! Poor Kagome - she has to realize Sessh will figure it out!


Zauberer di Vent (Chapter 16) - Tue 19 May 2020

Good luck, Kagome, youre going to need it because Sesshoumaru wont be happy when he knows that you are pregnant (he doesn't knows its his pup lol) 

Oooooooh Jealousy for an unknow male that Kagome was intimate when he already has a fiance, oops


SmilingFool (Chapter 16) - Tue 19 May 2020

OMG...  Such a sad and happy moment what can Kagome do?  Leave the country in order to save her babe....  Wow so messed up in the head I can understand the situation even though political its sad Kagome thinks the worst of Sesshomaru.....   Wonder if she forgot about Sesshomaru's beast?  LOL  How funny that will be when he tries to mate Princess Amelia...  Oh Kagome's going to be in trouble.  Loved the chapter just wished it were longer....  Update soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 16) - Mon 18 May 2020

Good chapter. 


SammyJams (Chapter 15) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

Can't wait for Sessh to realize what happened!


Koree (Chapter 15) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

Hopefully their beasts decide to let them in on the little secret before Sesshomaru mates Amelia


Master_sword1 (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

It's different than the original but still adorkable! thanks for the update ????


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

I'm exoted for the next! Feel sorry for kagome...


SmilingFool (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

Ok wow, now I have to say is the guard Amelia wants to bring is actually an assasin to Kill Sesshomaru.

 

Okay I find a few things wrong with the story even though I adore it.

 

this last chapter you stated Amelia and King Herald are Griffin's  when in the first few chapters they were Kitsune/Fox

 

I like the plot of the story, I've read most of it before.  I still like the plot but things need to be fixed for it to be great.  I've tried leaving reviews for some reason they just vanish.  I take it the computers hate me.... 

Anyways, chapter one you state Kagome's gone to war for seven years yet a year before she claimed her cousin's child.  then in chapter 2 you state its only been a few months that she had gone to war. 

Then you state that she is born a daiyokai, a daiyokai has to be made by ones work, effort, training and skills which takes hundreds of years. 

Example  Inu no Taisho was over three thousand years old before he died and he was a Taiyokai General. 

This last chapter with King Herald sending his daughter Sara/Amelia to give Sesshomaru an ultimatium for marriage.  You wrote two different demons yet only one was in the room.  Please dont get me wrong I really do like the story but with a bit of fixing it really would be great.  Until next time.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

Great chapters!

Happy Resurrection Day, He Is Risen!


Couldntbekeener3 (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

Yaaaah love this story. So glad your continuing it.


Kreve (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Apr 2020

thank you for updating ! It’s a good read.


CHERISH (Chapter 14) - Fri 08 Feb 2019

I love this story so far. I remember it was different at first so I'm guessing it was taken down and redone. What ever the cause was I think this version is better please update soon


Lady Crimson (Chapter 14) - Tue 06 Jun 2017

love the new version of this story


Loveyaa (Chapter 14) - Wed 05 Apr 2017

Well I guess we now know why both of them don't really remember it. I wonder what it will take to change that. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


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