Ok wow, now I have to say is the guard Amelia wants to bring is actually an assasin to Kill Sesshomaru.
Okay I find a few things wrong with the story even though I adore it.
this last chapter you stated Amelia and King Herald are Griffin's when in the first few chapters they were Kitsune/Fox
I like the plot of the story, I've read most of it before. I still like the plot but things need to be fixed for it to be great. I've tried leaving reviews for some reason they just vanish. I take it the computers hate me....
Anyways, chapter one you state Kagome's gone to war for seven years yet a year before she claimed her cousin's child. then in chapter 2 you state its only been a few months that she had gone to war.
Then you state that she is born a daiyokai, a daiyokai has to be made by ones work, effort, training and skills which takes hundreds of years.
Example Inu no Taisho was over three thousand years old before he died and he was a Taiyokai General.
This last chapter with King Herald sending his daughter Sara/Amelia to give Sesshomaru an ultimatium for marriage. You wrote two different demons yet only one was in the room. Please dont get me wrong I really do like the story but with a bit of fixing it really would be great. Until next time.
Great chapters!
Happy Resurrection Day, He Is Risen!
Yaaaah love this story. So glad your continuing it.
Kreve (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Apr 2020
thank you for updating ! It’s a good read.
CHERISH (Chapter 14) - Fri 08 Feb 2019
I love this story so far. I remember it was different at first so I'm guessing it was taken down and redone. What ever the cause was I think this version is better please update soon
love the new version of this story
Loveyaa (Chapter 14) - Wed 05 Apr 2017
Well I guess we now know why both of them don't really remember it. I wonder what it will take to change that. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Really enjoying this story!!!
Alashia (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Apr 2017
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter! I was hoping she would start putting two and two together. Soon I'm sure!
Natalia (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Apr 2017
Soooo that nausea is a sign, right? Does she also have reiki? Oh i just can't wait for more! Thx for updating! Will eagerly wait for the next chapter!
Toni (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Apr 2017
cant wait till he finds out -
Dana (Chapter 13) - Mon 27 Mar 2017
I'm a currently following this story but I have to ask. Wasn't kagome a virgin? If so then how is it possible for her to have breast milk if she never was pregnant?
I just to tell you I read Chap. 5 between Madonna ' s Material Girl and Christopher Cross ' s Arthur ' s Theme, gave it such a flair, like watching it all unfold. Very nice chapter by the way.
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