I love this story the way it was written before. Why did u decide to rewrite it? I was looking forward to seeing what was going to happen in the other version.
| Love the detail and how he low of the story is going. I cannot wait to see everything unfold when Sesshou-kun is introduced.  Keep it up you're doing great!   Ashley    
 
rose (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Sep 2013 | next chapter please    
 | Great start on the rewrite, keep it coming.    
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