You are doing an amazing job with weaving characters from various episodes from the series and movies to fit so perfectly with your storyline. I liked how Touga had saved Kagome from moving any further through the underworld and he protected her knowing Sesshoumaru'd stubborness and pride. Their banter back and forth had more meaning behind each statement for each of them as their past mistakes were also still so fresh in their minds.
Sesshoumaru's jealousy was really something. His father needed to get him riled up enough to fight for her there and now as Kagome was literally dying in both body and spirit. Sesshoumaru never truly dealt with emotions thinking their made a youkai weak but his father had to prove him wrong before Kagome was gone forever and with her Sesshoumaru and Rin's lives would be forfeit too.
Sesshoumaru caught on just in the nick of time and he earned Kagome's love and desire to be with him in the living world but I really enjoyed when he began to leave and turned to Thank his father with true honesty in his heart. I could imagine the shocke on Touga's face and then I could his big, warm smile light up his face as his son had learned that having someone to protect wasn't a weakness but a true strength he would soon learn.
It just a shame that no one ever gives these two a break enough to truly enjoy their intimate time together. The moth , Menoumaru should not have had the authority he seemed to have over when Sesshoumaru consemated his reunion with his mate. They should have had InuKimi put a stop to Menoumaru's scandelous endeavor but she, I think wanted to see if they could pull this off...if the human, Shikon Miko was strong enough to stand beside her son and gain the people's respect and devotion for their union.
Kagome went above and beyond what Eri had to teach her so quickly and she was better than any inuyoukai female that Sesshoumaru could have because she did not shy away and keep herself slightly behind her mate. No, she came up by his side and spoke strongly of how she felt that these people Sesshoumaru ruled over were now her people also and she never faltered on bit and it was like rubbing salt in an opened wound when she looked at Menoumaru and saw he had lost his determation to make her a fool in front of the people of the West. Even InuKimi gained a new respect it seems for our sweet and charming Miko Kagome, Lady Kagome from now on. I want to see Menoumaru get a reprimand or even be releaved of his position for trying to cause such an uproar before the Lord and Lady even had a chance to unwing from their journey between the living and the dead. InuKimi herself should agree that after what she herself went through for her son to regain his mate, that Menoumaru needs to be put in his place and never be allowed the chance to embarass his Lord or new Lady ever again.
Great job and such excellent work with all the characters we come to love so much. I'm looking forward to Sesshoumaru and Kagome's time to become a fully mated couple.
Hahaha. What's his plan, to mate Sesshomaru himself? What an idiot.
Sonrisa (Chapter 69) - Tue 19 Jul 2016
I just wanted to say that I've been reading a lot of your fics and that I like them. Or, at least, I liked them until you started putting too many arcs into them. This is based on two of your fics, Behind the Curtain and Sword Smith's Secret. Both of them you've ben dragging on too long when 'The End' should have falling from your fingers. Behind the Curtain was supposed to be about Kagome's demeaning, yet necessary job as a stripper, and how her relationship with Sesshomaru progressed. Now that she's not a stripper, now that she's pregnant, practically every end is neatly tied up, yet you insist on continuing with boring, filler-type chapters. Same goes for SSS. At first when I read it, I was immediately drawn into the action, romance, and drama. But the time for it to end should have been around when Naraku met his end. That's "The Sword Smith's Secret," right? Kagome's whole Shikon Miko gig? There's no need for all this bring-me-back-from-the-Underworld and why-did-you0let-me-go angst that's not angst. I've been feeling this way for quite some time. I don't think this is something you can fix, unless you somehow move all the superficial chapters into a sequel. That would be the best option for you right now. This doesn't mean you're a bad writer; far from it. In fact, I enjoy reading your work. However, you have to know when to stop.
Nicely done lol as soon as you said moth youkai I knew it was him! I love what you're doing here!
Is this the last chapter? Or is there more to come? I mean, he saves her & so now what happens with the incorrect mating mark he left still being ink like?
(Chapter 68) - Fri 01 Jul 2016
well... at least they are together again and open to talking it out. Cause they sure have a lot to talk about. Plenty of emotion. Good job with the flow of it all. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
(Chapter 68) - Wed 29 Jun 2016
This story has come such a long way!! So glad the retrieval was successful. Well done!
I think I'm afraid of the drama that'scoming.
Well good for them! Inupapa deserves a freaking award. Always coming in clutch and saving the day. And Inukimi really doesn't get enough love. I like her in this story. I just like this story haha
YES! Finally said it! I love the interaction between him and his parents too, its so nice to see progress in those relationships, especially with his mom. (:
(Chapter 68) - Tue 28 Jun 2016
Yay now I'm feeling relieved phewww
Andrearei (Chapter 68) - Tue 28 Jun 2016
Lovely chapter :)
(Chapter 67) - Tue 21 Jun 2016
Just use everybody else as a reason for her to go back! And then he can try and explain himself. So much drama! Hopefully they can work through this in time. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
(Chapter 67) - Mon 20 Jun 2016
Gahhh whyyy cliffhangers! Lol. Thank you so much for the update though :)
Oh boy, Sesshomaru needs to get over his emotionally stunted self. Nice work on this chapter!
Inupapa all in the coolaid lmfao why am I not surprised. These cliff hangers tho, you're killing us!
(Chapter 67) - Mon 20 Jun 2016
I've been a little confused about this for a while. When she first lost her memories of him he was shocked, as you would think one would be. Then others started the story that he stopped her from falling and then looked to him to go along with it. But, right after that he should have tackled her and forced her to remember? She can be upset with him, but she completely believed he was a stranger to her. How would he have handled that to make her remember? Is it such a foreign idea that he could have been hurt and confused? Everyone can be it appears except him. Why isn't she upset with anyone else for letting her live a lie?
I aboslutely LOVE this chapter! I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru convinces Kagome to come back with him. That is one converstation I am really looking forward to.
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