I don't think you need your stories to be beta read you are an awesome author you really balancing everything correctly I think it can be really tasking job to come up with such awesome ideas and continuing them , your other story(Blood stained) and this one give such a strong message It's like saying "Every cloud has a silver lining" it gives hope be it fighting from an incurable disease or having to overcome a bad ordeal ,it's really awesome we should always give ourselves a second chance and definitely we'll be happy don't just mellow in misery....  

Ooops I forgot to tell the imp thing please please update the chapter sooonnn .. pretty please *puppy eye's* @_@

Please tell me you will be updating soon?!?! I am usually all about the adventure aspect of fanfictions but for whatever reason I am really enjoying this, please don't give up now!!!!

A really touching story. Looking forward to seeing how Sesshomaru and Kagome grow  even closer. Please keep writing! 

Just started to read your story this morning. I just have a mild issue of where she suddenly has a full head of hair. You refer to it a few times (her hair covered her eyes when she was cleaning out the blood, when she fell in the shower her hair spilled over her shoulder) but earlier in the chapter she only has a small fuzz on the top of her head. I'm just utterly confused.

I love  it please write more i was moved on how sesshomaru is changing, I thought inuyasha was dead how is he going to see him.

welcome back! of the many stories that go MIA this is one of the few i wish would come back... moar please.

YOU MADE ME CRY! I was reading this in the library with tears running down my face and my friends thought I was crazy! Great story. Sad, but well written

-DC

Dear Madison, this is definitely one of my favourite Sess/Kag works. Your latest chapter was gripping, just like all the chapters before it. Please keep it up...:)

PS--Sorry, meant to review earlier; better late than never huh! ;)

Thanks for updating, but why the cilffhanger?! Your story is great enough that you don't need to resort to that. Well, anyway, mata ne!

Late but great, keep it coming.

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Thank you so much for updating. I have been having a really crapy days lately... And the fact that one of my favorite authors, just updated one of my favorite stories… Well, that just made my day! :) So thank you!

As for the plot…

OMG there is so sexual tension in there… o.O If Sesshomaru was to “see” this, I´m sure you would have be prosecuted for a serious case of blue balls by now. :P (kidding xD)

Any way loved it as always! :D

Ps: There is only a few mistakes! (3 or 4) nothing serious! :) Please don´t leve us hanging for so long!!! :D

Kisses

It's great to see that you were able to update. I understand that life happens, don't worry. I m just glad that you are still writing. 

madisonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

everyday i check your profile its 21%!!!! and suddenly BAM UPDATE!!

WHAT!??!? maybe i misread the beginning chapters, I thought Inuyasha was dead.  Anywho, it is cool beans to me about the late update.  Life happens. I enjoyed the chappie and all the insane emotional touches going on.  Can't wait for another one

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Love this story, can't wait for the next chap!

I love it, its a realistic take on it. Would love to see how it evoles. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep up the good work!

I really love this story, and your way of building the characters and the plot along with a gradual and realistic view of how their feelings develop for the other over time.  Truely enjoy your writing and very much looking forward to the continuation of this story!

I was reading very carefully through this and you mentioned that jaken had died and I guess ah-un can't really live in the city. What about Shippo, is he still alive? You don't ever mention difinitively whether or not he is still alive. It says in the series that youkai who are able to take human form are said to be powerful. And Shippo is a kitsune and they are easilly able to do tranformation and take on a human form & life. He could easily use his skills to live in a more modern world. Heck he could end up being the rich one. He could transform into a young child and put himself on the steps of an ophanage and they would take care of his paper trail.  I can understand that Sesshoumaru might not have kept up with him over the years, so is he going to put out feelers for him. Is the person he called Shippo? or maybe Totosai managed to weather the years. Heck maybe even Sesshoumaru's mother might show up to see the woman her son has mated and married.

i dont think seeing someone in the shower should result in a story being rated MA........