Its a very good chapter dear...its been a long build up but the wait was rewarding...Keep up the good work.
I can't imagine why you wouldn't be happy with this but you did an awesome job!!!! It's about dang time they did the hot, mad, wild, passionate money dance! Dang that was sooo hot!
I can understand where Kagome is coming from, truly. I am disabled with just too dang many things to even go into but it took who I was...away. I am no longer that vibrant, carefree and highly active person anymore. My child is taking care of me, not the other way around! It's a hard thing to embrace and still try to act normal because having a private pity party just doesn't do it for me anymore. That's what Kagome is doing. She is having a private pity party. She can't see past what she's experienced all these years. She can't see anyone, let alone Sesshoumaru loving her because she can't love herself right now. All she sees is what the disease has done to her. She's silently lost within herself and wishing someone would rescue her from this place and she is falling in love with Sessh and knows he doesn't feel love, he feels lust and he made a choice to help keep her alive and he'll make due with her because of the bond between them. He doesn't know she's feeling love for him, not lust and it takes her back to the time when she loved InuYasha and that love wasn't for her alone. She was a copy to him. She wanted love, a family and a life with the one who she wanted to love soley her.
Maybe now that they did finally connect he'll get her to talk to him. I have yet to talk to a doctor who could really help me. This is my problem not their's. No one can feel what I feel inside. I think Sesshoumaru can truly relate with her, if they'll try. Just as he said, this wasn't what he expected from the future and he's reduced to hiding from beings he himself is superior to on so many levels, yet here he is biding his time.
Together they could have a great life inspiring each other to be a better person and to reach beyond the walls they've created for themselves. Sesshoumaru needs to feel like the youkai he was and he can with Kagome by his side and she canhave the love and family she used to desire. She needs to teach Sesshoumaru that lust is not love. With such a loving heart as hers she can do this...if they want it...that's the whole key here and InuYasha??? , well, he's not in the living world, they are and they need to make a real life for themselves and stop playing husband and wife. A piece of paper doesn't make the marriage and neither does lustful sex (though it has it's advantages).
I just love this story so much. It hit home for me because I can see Kagome for how she feels. I've been there and I'm done with that. I'm still a young woman inside my mind though I maybe be older and disabled on the outside. I don't want to forget to live. Life has been hard, real hard but I got through it because I had my husband, my daughter, and my mother(God rest her soul) to keep me from getting to far away from them emotionally.
Gosh, I'm really rambling here, but this fic is phenominal and I love each and every chapter. Even sweet Hojo is still holding a torch for the woman and she doesn't even know it. She needs to believe she can do better and she can. JEN
Woohoo! Great chapter.
:))) loved it well written :))))
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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FINALLY!!!!!
THANK YOU!!! AWESOME LEMON!!!!!!
I'm not a regular reviewer but I've been following this story and I absolutely love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
<3
KonanSilverMoon (Chapter 20) - Mon 06 Oct 2014
Oh my jebus!!!!!!! I am soooo hanging on the end of that chapter!!!!! I can't wait for you to update I'm so excited haha, I hope you are doing ok. Your writing style is really good and this is one of my favorite stories so far. And you shouldn't apologize for making your stories long ever. Most people don't write long stories, making it soooo difficult to find any stories to read that are actually long enough to take up some actual time to read and pass the time. And reading is one of my favorite pastimes , and you are an amazing author. people who won't read long stories and those who diss long stories are people who are either unable to concentrate enough to keep the story straight and are pissed off as a result or are just incapable of spending time reading a story the way it is written. I'm hoping my review can help you realize that there are people existing who are excited to read your stories, my only complaint is i usually only read completed stories just cause I'm impatient ant want to just keep reading hahaha it's just that feeling of crap I gotta wait to see when it gets updated! I want to know what happens next!!! Ahhhh lol but that's not a complaint aimed towards you, I'm just excited and impatient lol but I will be waiting and watching for your next update!!!!!
Wonderful chapter, keep it coming
Minime (Chapter 20) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
I read all the posted chapters of this story in one day. It made my Sunday. I am really glad that I did chance upon and read your work. Looking forward for the next chapter. Please do keep writing.
Alii (Chapter 20) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
Lmaoo I wouldn't call it a mistake. Its more like you at the end of the rainbow with a pot of gold.
That was awesome!! I'm so excited to see where this will take their relationship!
Eris (Chapter 20) - Sat 06 Sep 2014
Excellent chapter. The emontion is so thick. Poor Kagome. But I truly love this Fic. Please update again soon! Ja Ne!
Ankita (Chapter 20) - Sat 06 Sep 2014
awesomeee chapterr....
Great update, please update again soon!!! Can't wait!!! <(^_^)>
Finally Kagome reciprocates for Sesshoumaru! I was feeling sorry for Sesshoumaru a while back because he keeps fighting against his instincts...
Omg. Omg. OMG!!!!! You updated and it was f*ing amazing!!! OMG! Please continue!!!! <3
Xoxo (Chapter 20) - Fri 05 Sep 2014
Omg!!!!!!!!!!!! That was hot ok sorry for being blunt but u need to update like as soon as u can the wait is well worth it since she finnally grew some balls to suck on his shit wow he's last sentence to her was amazing she should've said ok dammit but of course we gotta wait for that agghhhhh pls update cuz that was a turn on!!!!!I still say he should've just fuck her lmao ok sorry for the language but we all know we're pass that if we have read this far okay I just wanna say all your readers including u are freakssssss!!
Lena (Chapter 20) - Fri 05 Sep 2014
I've missed this story!!!
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Wow.
I hope you post another chapter soon, or I'll spontaneously combust.
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