Her new place sounds nice and peacefull.
Awww, Sesshy didn't get his attention. Lookit that pout- so cute. I just knew that loud slap had to be Miroku getting hit. Somehow, Sango calling Sesshoumaru 'pet' got a rise out of me. I forgot that Sesshoumaru has been a dog and pet for a while now; that and the fact that he is technically her pet. I don't know, I guess I was thinking old Sesshoumaru, not doggy, I'm going to be your guard dog sesshy. I wonder what this place is going to be like. Oh, I hate the cold when I'm outside because my fingers and toes freeze so quickly and easily even in thick socks and boots, as well as gloves. I do, however, love it when it's cool/chilly in my room. It's the best temperature to sleep in. I do prefer cold over hot, you can put more clothes on to get warm, you can only take off so much, meaning you can get butt naked and still be hot. I wonder if Kagome likes the cold. It's probably pretty comfortable for Sesshoumaru with the hair and all. The fact that he's a youkai probably helps too. Whooo!! More unwanted vacation. Lol, the beginning of this trip doesn't look to great, what with the dragging her onto a plane when she didn't want to-oh and the fact that she didn't even want to go in the first place.
--KD
Oookay, so definitely already living in America. I've never actually known anyone with so serious a fear of flying. I was thinking Sesshoumaru would take her arm or the edge of her pants or something and lead her up there. Then again, with how terrified she was at the idea of flying, it probably wouldn't have done much good. Did the attendant Taser her? lol, she was K.O.
Um, there's a few grammar errors here too- like using 'their' instead of "there" just like in the last chapter. Oh, and to breathe, is spelled differently than breath, like taking a breath. An easy way to remember is, when you say 'It's hard for you to breathe', you emphasize the 'e'. BrEathe. So, there's an extra letter on the end- an 'e'.
Lmao, Kagome was ready to beat him into next year!! Go Kagome! Protecting Sesshoumaru as best she can, just like he is protecting her the best he can. There are a few random grammar errors in this but it doesn't make it any less readable. Did they just get to America...or had they always been in America? I noticed she has a passport now, but I didn't know if she used it. Eh, I guess not since he was handing it to them then.... *shrug* ah well. Whoo hoo, unwanted vacation. Let's go. Onward.
--KD
I came back and found my email blown up with notifications for this story. I was ELATED!!!! I got to work immediately.
I definitely did not see the attack coming. I didn't see a lot of this coming actually. You love making me guess what is going to happen next and then completely trounce my ideas. I'm in love!! *big smile* I was scared for Kagome, what with her blacking out as she did. I figured Sesshoumaru would be okay, simply because I know he is actually the great and powerful Sesshoumaru, one who could not be laid low by such a trivial thing as a bullet... I was still panicking though. You would be the one to allow me believe one thing and then let me be wrong. I feel bad for Kagome having to go into protective custody. I have seen TV shows portray how hard Witness Protection is on everyone involved and connected to the ones now being protected. Their friends/family are not allowed to know where they are going, they are not allowed to contact their family, their friends, they are snatched from their jobs with no warning; their lives are completely torn apart. They are just snatched away and sent off to some random place and set to start a new life where they go. I understand she will be able to return because she's only in protective custody, but the effects are still the same, only she is allowed to leave in the end when she is safe once more, however long that takes. Aww, she's fiercely attached and protective of little Gin. I wonder what's in the box he had Inuyasha bring him. Kouga should be kicked in the danglers. -_- I'm glad Sesshoumaru is going to protect not only her physically/health wise, but from emotional hurts or just keep her from cutting Kouga the length of the Mississippi.
Wheee!!! You are on a roll, and so now the story is as well. Muuwarrrr!!!! Please. :)
--KD
This story is really good! I can't wait till he finally lets Kagome see his true form.
Awwwww!!!! The edges of my lips are reaching my ears!!! That was adorable. Little Nala was riding on the great and terrible Sesshoumaru like he was a pony. LMAO!!!! I used to want to do that as a little kid. My parents wouldn't let me. I mean we used to have two Rotweilers and a black and white Tibetan Mastiff, I was sure they could hold my weight. The answer was a resounding no. I think I'm jealous of little Nala now. It's funny how she got the vibe that he didn't like being told to "mush" and stopped. But he indulged her anyway and did as she wanted. *squeeeeeeee* I just want to grab and squeeze them both, a big, fat, squeeling hug. Lol, little Nala was pulling on his ears and everything, such a predictable child-like thing to do. She even recognized that there was youki underneath that cute little doggy...well not little. I wonder what the broach was that caught his eye. Ohhh, Kagome caught a picture of him. I'll have to try that method, the on the sneak method to take my doggy pictures. The fact that Nala was asleep on his back just wholly and completely ended the chapter with a big, fat smile on my face. I'm falling so deep in love. And all this was because of a bet he lost with Inuyasha.
--KD
Last paragraph, only sentence-> I think you meant break room (brakes= the things on moving vehicles, cars, bikes, scooters, etc.)
Hahahaha!! Children are funny. I can't believe she yanked his tail, though. I actually never seen a child do that but I have seen them do some pretty......um....I-don't-know-what-to-call-it things. You know, when little kids try to pick up a puppy and they are holding them by their forelegs, leaving the rest to dangle? And sometimes they trip and fall on them? Cuddling them in strange positions? I bet poor Sesshoumaru is thinking of all the horrible things she will subject him to; pulling hair when trying to hold on to them, yanking on ears, getting things all in their hair. I can only imagine the horror that child could wreak upon him, and I bet it's the same thing for Sesshoumaru. I wonder if he'd be annoyed at Kagome for leaving him at the mercy of a young child. I also wonder if he 'says' something whether or not the little girl would understand. Every time I read a bit more, I just imagine all the things that could happen. I tend to be very wrong, but it has me coming back so I think it's okay. :) I thank you for the personalized chapter, though. It was very unexpected, but it very appreciated nonetheless. Onward, dear writer, I await your new chapter's arrival.
--KD
Oh, I almost forgot; first paragraph, third sentence, it says 'coughed' when I think you meant to put 'caught'
~~Ooooooooh so cute! :3 Continue please!
*dreamily* I'm in love. *sigh* I love Sesshoumaru stuck in dog form. You portray him so well, still maintaining him, while making it all funny and enjoyable at the same time. Kagome's intuitive understanding of all the subtle nuances he gives off and responds to them accordingly. She spoils him just as he should be. *sighs dreamily* I am sad that there were only six chapters but I'll receive an email when you add another few *wiggles eyebrows* chapters, so I can be first on the scene. Happy Writing.
--KD
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