Fascinating story. I can hardly wait to find out what Sango and Miroku uncovered.
It would be even better if the often-mixed words would not be so. Things like there/they're/their, your/you're, and a handful of others. A grammar check program Might help you... but an editor/beta or being able to catch them yourself would be even better. It's just a bit distracting, and it lowers the overall quality of your work. Which is a bummer 'cause the story is superb!
Thanks so much for writing!
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Fascinating story. I can hardly wait to find out what Sango and Miroku uncovered.
It would be even better if the often-mixed words would not be so. Things like there/they're/their, your/you're, and a handful of others. A grammar check program Might help you... but an editor/beta or being able to catch them yourself would be even better. It's just a bit distracting, and it lowers the overall quality of your work. Which is a bummer 'cause the story is superb!
Thanks so much for writing!
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Just started reading this story last night, now I'm caught up and loving it. Can't wait to see what happens next!
*lip wibbles* but but i hafta go to bed *whines at you* updating so late!
you.... are so mean.... TT3TT *throws c0okieS*
This is an interesting turn of events.
O_O you better update!
I am so throughly confused now..... Is the doctor like Jakotsu or does it have multiple personality complexes. So the big question is what in the world is going on.... Is the doc really the bad guy in disguise? Could be seeing how it was a day late. Hummm.... Update soon.
dianne (Chapter 73) - Sun 03 Jun 2012
is she pregnant?! o_0
seriously! hope it's a bebe! >:3333333
Oh wow these were the cutest chapters....... Is there going to be a little Sesshomaru coming soon? It's obvious why they can't smell or sense her rekai. Update soon, I wanna read more..... Thanks for writing a great story.
0o0o0o0o0o0o i hope it's a bebe! >:3
I kinda feel bad for Sesshomaru right now. The poor guy's gotta be confussed as hell. I wonder what's going on?
awe poor kagome and puppy!
Update soon!
dianne (Chapter 60) - Sun 06 May 2012
aww, so sweet! ^.^
I absolutly love this story!
Pricila (Chapter 60) - Sun 06 May 2012
Ahhh, how sweet!
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