Whoa, a girl has to take a break because Anatomy and Physiology is trying to kill her and comes back to overload. I am in love with Sesshoumaru so much. He showed her who he was completely and she didn't freak out, she actually had a positive reaction. They even stayed wrapped up together in the bed. *squeals* Ohh, you just warm me up. Okay, I did find it weird they were watching her with the cameras at first, but I understand the need to make sure she is alright. But wtheck was with Miroku and Sango coming over and separating them? I was all types of confused. They were so cute together....then all of sudden they were doing the horizontal tango. I was so lost. I was still in doggy-> friend mode, I hadn't reached friend-> sex buddy. I was going O.O she's having sex with her pet. lol, then I was like *shrug* well, get it on then. I was glad to finally know what was in that box too. I was guessing the entire time, and it turned out to be his personal IDs and cards and such. I felt stupid, very stupid. OMG, snow, ugh snow is horrible. I love the cool/kinda cold, but snow is killer. It's so bad, the tiny pup was out in the cold and not doing so well because of the snow...well maybe the cold. Either way! The snow is an evil creature that pretends to be wonderful and beautiful, until it latches onto you and pee's on your legs, arms, etc, and the wind blowing on you starts to kill you. Those two evil things are in this together. Lol, just joking. I find the little hint into Kagome's past relationship that at some point, Sesshoumaru witnessed, very interesting. I can definitely see why he would want to protect her beyond being her guard dog and liking her. I wonder whatever happened to Hojo. lol, It would serve him right to be in jail where there are no women, only....needy men. Muwahahahha. If he or anyone else were to ever try it again, I bet Sessho would lop off the offending appendage. *nods* Mmhm. What ever shall they do in this super cold place? I couldn't even imagine. I would choose, never go outside and stay in and be warm with Sesshoumaru. Snow is evil. Wheee, they are having fun, and Sango and Miroku are trusting Sesshoumaru. Now if only the little one would be okay and we could see how he would fit into all this fun stuff. Why would anyone abadon him though? Was he the weakest pup? Or are they dead? >.> I'm asking a lot of questions...I will simply shut up and wait for the story to move. ONWARD dear authoress. I follow you faithfully.
--KD
ahhhh! Cliffy, these bulk updates spoils and drives the reader batty!!! *sqeak* oh i said that out loud....crap *big puppy eyes* pls update soon
~~Awwww this fic is really just SO dang cute! XD I love it! Looking forward to more!
Aww poor little guy!
That would be cool if they did have a baby!
About time they got it together!! I love this story!
dianne (Chapter 40) - Tue 24 Apr 2012
I just found this story and I absolutly love it!! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^.^
Pricila (Chapter 39) - Tue 24 Apr 2012
I'm loving it! I wonder what Sango thinks about all this?
| .....And a couple of times in chapter 32, you wrote Luna instead of Kagome. Giggles
| Loving it so far! ..... But *whispers* you wrote Luna instead of Kagome in the 3rd or 4th paragraph from the bottom of chapter 22.
Oops ! I realized I didn't leave correct definitions for each version...
There = shows a position of an object, place, or person.
They're = short version of "they are".
Their = Posessive. "That is THEIR dog!"
Yoroshiku!
Oops ! I realized I didn't leave correct definitions for each version...
There = shows a position of an object, place, or person.
They're = short version of "they are".
Their = Posessive. "That is THEIR dog!"
Yoroshiku!
I have to say that I really honestly love your story.
BUT there is one thing that really bothers me.
About 80-95 % of the time you use the incorrect version of "There" "They're" or "Their".
For example:
Chapter 36, "Soon after Sango went to a closet and said their was games. "
Should have been "Soon after, Sango went to a closet and said THERE WERE games."
There = "There is the dog."
They're = "They're (they are) walking the dog."
Their= "That is their dog."
There are multiple misuses in the earlier chapters. It's pretty much the only thing that really irked me. OTHERWISE, great plot and great character development and wonderful descriptive words.
That's so sweet! Even in dog form he's taking care of them!
Aww poor little guy! That's actually kind of sweet that he's acting this way.
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