you're destroying all my preconceived notions of Sesshomaru's driving. XD
I'm currently loving your story right now, but I've already seen this mistake in another fic. I've lasted through it because I didn't think it a too big deal but that drabble fic was 600 chapters long and now I'm about to go through it again, so I've decided to tell you. Sesshomaru's last name should be spelled "Taisho", not "Tashio". Unless you purposefully made his last name Tashio without any regard to Inu no Taisho's name, the spelling is incorrect. I know this isn't a big deal, but the thing is whenever I read "Tashio" I keep thinking pistachio and it totally kills the mood for me. I can't get into the severe character of the story at all. Of course, this is just me letting you know what I think is a distraction from your story. You can do whatever you want with this knowledge. Great story!
Eris (Chapter 257) - Fri 21 Mar 2014
Great story! I can't wait for a update!!
What does it say
Loveyaa (Chapter 257) - Sat 15 Mar 2014
Good things? Does it speak of good things? Everything will be happily veer after right? Haven't they earned that? I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Uuuwaaah! Cliff hanger!! I can't wait
Thank you. :)
Haven (Chapter 257) - Sat 15 Mar 2014
Sweet chapter, but how in the heck could you leave it there? Contract details please!!! Thanks
mari (Chapter 257) - Sat 15 Mar 2014
great thanks.
Loveyaa (Chapter 256) - Tue 11 Mar 2014
As long as the pups are here, the rest is ok. It is sad that Fuiasu had to live with this moment for so long, and has been preparing for it and carrying the burden all by herself. I think you did a great job with her character. I wonder how the pups will turn out. And then there is still the question of the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Ahh...still so much to wonder about. Thanks for the dedication, it really means a lot! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
mari (Chapter 256) - Tue 11 Mar 2014
as always great thanks.
Thanks for starting back up again! Love this story!
Haven (Chapter 255) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
No no, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I so loved Sess' mom, always one of my fave characters. I loved the way you wrote her character. This was a very sad chap.
I actually didn't care much for Toga in this story, just something horn-dog about him with every female. He gets far too many free 'passes' in stories and Sess' mom usually gets the character shaft which is why I always cheer for her. I guess I just didn't understand how come Toga and Fuiasu didn't work out bc unlike other fics, she was really cool and quite a catch in this story. But somehow you tied it all up and it makes sense now. Her sacrifice was soooo sad:( I'll miss her. I hope Sess and Kagome AND Toga do something remarkable for her....damn you! I'm all teary now
Haven (Chapter 254) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
Lord god, I just knew she was going to be birthing them babies soon, like, now. Great timing Kagome as per usual. Awesome action by the way!!!
mari (Chapter 255) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
so sad but great update thanks.
Ariel (Chapter 255) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
Fuiasu's story is so tragic :'( she is such an amazing woman! It's sad that she made the decision to sacrifice herself for others. Can't wait for the next chapter(s)!
Ankita (Chapter 255) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
I really liked Fuiasu and I knew she was gonna die still I couldn't stop crying seeing that both of them still love each other made it really hard to come to terms with even naraku's love for he T_T I'm crying while writing this review T_T T_T ;(
Thank you for such a beautiful chapter
Ealla (Chapter 255) - Mon 10 Mar 2014
oh my god, turn on the waterworks for me, 5 tissues later, what an amazing chapter, beautifully written, wow.
mari (Chapter 252) - Sun 09 Mar 2014
awesome thanks for the updates.
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