I usually can't stand drabbles. They tend to be engaging enough in the beginning, but as the story comes to a close I find myself skipping chunks of texts to get back on track of the story. This one was different. The way the dialog was written was engaging enough to force the reader to slow down and digest the stories the characters told.
I will say though that the ending was very abrupt. Where's Toga and did he ever hook with with Kag's mom? How many children do Inu and Kikyo have? I remembeer in an earlier chapter, right after Kikyo said Inu had a vasectomy, Toga mentioned his two sons and his granddaughter, and the chapter after that Sess is holding a neice. So, there were some inconsistencies and I think the ending wasn't wrapped up too nicely. Still, the story was original and you didn't portray Sess' mother as some cold-hearted b**** who deserved infidelity. Thank goodness, because her character is so maligned by this fandom (with Inupapa having near-god status).
Susi8 (Chapter 264) - Thu 25 Jun 2015
I love your story as much as I did when I started reading it a long time ago! I'm not sure if this last chapter is the end or not since it has 'fin' at the end of the chapter, but I hope to read more of this story. I know Kagome wants him to be around for their pups, but she hasn't really said that she wants to be with him just yet. And where are they going to live? Is she going to finish fixing her secluded house or move back to his condo? Lol Or is Sesshoumaru going to physically help her repair the house? Anyways I hope you are well and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful stories.
Treece (Chapter 264) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
Thank you for writing and completing this wonderful, amazing story. I enjoyed every twist and turn, until finally the ending which was as bittersweet as the title. Many thanks again!
Blommie8 (Chapter 264) - Sun 19 Apr 2015
Wow?
Is it the end?
The 'fin' word means?
I hope there still lot of chapters come.
Finally im done from the begining til the last chapter..took me 2 days.
Blommie8 (Chapter 231) - Sun 19 Apr 2015
Why my review doesn't came out?
Anyway..great story!!
I couldn't stop read it.
Coz i just found yours!
I give you ten thumbs up!!
I'll borrow it to my neighbour.
Xoxo
Blommie8 (Chapter 231) - Sun 19 Apr 2015
Blommie8 (Chapter 231) - Sun 19 Apr 2015
Cheryl (Chapter 264) - Sat 18 Apr 2015
wow this is long haha XD nice story and love the latest chapter~ keep it up!
This story is literally amazing. It is one of the most well written, well thought out collections I've seen on here. I really hope you continue this particular arc. I know I'd love to find out what happens after but if you don't it's still one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I'm thinking I could content myself to read any of your other stories if they're even half as good as this. I know I'm gushing at this point but I don't care. I'm more of a lurker and it's rare for me to feel the need to review so please take this as the highest compliment I can offer. ^.~
Loveyaa (Chapter 264) - Sat 18 Apr 2015
Yay for happiness! Sesshoumaru was putting a lot of faith in her to not just shut him out of her and their babies' lives. Luckily it paid off, like waiting for you to come back and keep the story going. I can't wait to see what happens next and for their happily ever after :)
I love when the heroine pregnant
Haven (Chapter 264) - Sat 18 Apr 2015
Omg, you updated. rl has been/ IS crazy and I havent been on here for some time as well. I just came back a few weeks ago And remembered how much I enjoy S/K and miss it. I'm glad you are writing again.
personally, I think sess and Kag have been put through the ringer already. I mean, talk about a roller coaster. I'd love to see them finally get a real chance at happiness as a couple, more development there please. Then I'd love to see their interactions as a family with the kiddos and all of the other interlopers (extended family). The only thing I'm unsure about is this new evil that is coming...the set up was so big that to not address it will make it feel incomplete. I'm sure you'll make it great though.
thanks for updating!
I think it start to warming up..
I mean..interesting
Ankita (Chapter 264) - Fri 17 Apr 2015
@_@ hawww so shorttt T_Tplz update moree more more
Ahhh I finally caught up!! I can't believe how much has happened! But I am so happy you're still working so hard on this piece and know that it is very much appreciated! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Phyllis (Chapter 263) - Fri 01 Aug 2014
Great chapters! Can't wait to read the upcoming scene between Kags and Sesshomaru!
Ankita (Chapter 263) - Wed 30 Jul 2014
^_^ gladd that you updated after so long and the added bonus were so many chappies <3 we already know kags isn't that cold hearted she'll choose the best for her children I just wish sessho would change though -_-
Good chapter, keep it coming.
Great chapter, keep it coming.
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Great story, keep it coming
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