Oh my gosh. I remember when I first started reading this and the intriguing plot that was building and how interesting you kept each new update. (Can't call it a chapter really, it's too small for that ,huh?)
I am totally entralled in all the new twists and turns this has taken. I honestly can't believe that Kagome was some how involved in Rin's death and she blamed HERself for it. To listen to the story unfold was just so heartwrenching sad and to think that her own huband who she and her childhood friend knew for awhile before she married him could turn so visiously evil. I got the reference to him being related to Naraku. I don't know if anyone else did but it started to make sense after that.
You have done a marvelous job describing an abusive relationship and how the woman will most times not think anything of it until it is so brutal and she is too intimidated to do anything. She blames herself for his anger, threats, and abuse. You even did a wonderful job with Sesshoumaru in this. I must give you high praise for both portrayals and if you have won any awards, you deserved them.
You are giving us a truly amazing story all the while trying to go to school and work for a living. College is not an easy thing and managing a life and work is additional stress, so I'd like to thank you for taking time to give us this story. I am by no means finished but it's really late and I must go to bed as my meds are pulling me down desparately telling me to sleep but I don't want to stop reading.
Well, I'm giving up for now but I couldn't go to sleep without praising you on this that I have read. I honestly can't wait for more and I am so happy you didn't end it when you said you could have. It would have been a fine place to stop but then I can see always wondering and trying to make up "what happened" next in my mind as I often do when writers stop where they could have tied up the story neatly. Thanks again. I'll be back when I wake up. JEN
Loveyaa (Chapter 226) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
Ding dong the witch is dead. The wicked witch, that mean old witch. I'm a little surprised he died when he did. I can only imagine hats to come then. I really wanna know what the vision was about. Can't the lady just get a break...though there is a lot of pregnancy left and Sesshoumaru still has to make up. Kagome's totally had it coming for all the pain and suffering he put her through. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Phyllis (Chapter 226) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
So very happy that he's finally gone! Great chapter!
momo1o1 (Chapter 226) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
YEAH! GO KAGOME!! I totally agree with your choice to having kagome kill jirobo instead of sess it seems only right after all the crap he put her through. Thank God this isnt over, im not ready to let this story got yet (lol) but curious to see what's gonna happen with this story now that jirobo is dead :)
thanks for the update :)
p.s. omg! are the babies gonna be ok??!?
Wow!! I was waiting for that!! Now who will Kagome choose?
Awesome chapter!!! I am so glad you had Kagome alone kill him. It showed the strength she has gained the strength of her resolve never to be a victim again. I hope she ultimately takes pride in herself even if she doesn't want to necessarily take a life. Curious about the teaser you left on the vision though : ) Thanks for the update!
mari (Chapter 226) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
LOVED it thanks.
Alii (Chapter 226) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
Woohoo! (': I am so proud of her! I hope he suffered a lot! Please update soon!
Haven (Chapter 226) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
omg, ogm, omg, omg!!! Amazing - like raise the roof double fist pump style!!!! I kept hearing Mortal Kombat's "FINISH HIM" all while I was reading the last chapter. I'm glad it was Kagome who did it. Wonder what will happen with the jewel and Fuiasu's visions and Sess and Koga and Kag's mom and Inudad? I'm glad to know that there is still more story to tell. Great job and thanks for writing.
hw (Chapter 226) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
wowza! she killed him! good going kagome! i was so hoping that he wouldn't get away but thought that he would for future plot twists. so yeah, that was totally unexpected and now i'm wondering if jirobo can have any influence from the afterlife? hmm...
any great update as usual!
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