Hi! First, I love your story. Second, I guess the island you refer in the story that is near Haiti is Tortuga, an island that belongs to Haiti. Just for the record, Haiti is not a Central American country, is a Caribbean country. The Central American countries are: Guatemala, HOnduras, El SAlvador, Belice, Nicaragua, Costa Rica and Panama. And you can also include their territorial properties such as Isla del Coco, that belongs to Costa Rica or the islands in the CAribbean side that belongs to NIcaragua.
My goal is not to mark your mistake, is just that I am costarrican, so I know that part of geography very well and I know Caribbean people don't like to be "encased" as mainland people.
Pricila (Chapter 84) - Wed 18 Dec 2013
I'm truly enjoying your story and appreciate the explanation on the use of dono, I was actually wondering what it meant - thanks! Can't wait to see where your story goes. Priss ^^
Denise (Chapter 83) - Wed 18 Dec 2013
Well I hope she learns to relax a bit so she can get better.
I like this story a lot. Great update :)
will we eventually know why sesshy left rin?
will we eventually know what happened to the spy's family?
will we eventually war with the snakes?
will there eventually be lemons?
will kagome eventually be kidnapped (again?) or will katsurou/rin be kidnapped?
will we know if rin x katsurou?
will we know rins abilities and superpowers?
will we sango and miroku come back to the picture?
will a new guy come in and seduce kagome?
will a new girl come in and seduce sesshy?
Eve (Chapter 83) - Tue 17 Dec 2013
Yes another chapter. Please update again soon!
Love this story!
great story so far...i love how Sesshoumaru interacts with Kagome and the little one ;3
...just a small critique...please don't use the suffix -dono when Sesshoumaru is talking to Kagome...it's not appropriate because he has a far more higher standing than Kagome regarding social status and genderwise
...this suffix implicates royalty and a very very deep respect for the person..... and even when you argue that Kagome now belongs to this league it is not appropriate cause....have you ever heared a king say : "your royal highness" to a princess? ;3...cause that is what it sounds/ feels like when Sesshoumaru uses -dono...
Denise (Chapter 82) - Tue 17 Dec 2013
Awww!!! I feel so bad for her. I hope she gets to heal now that she is under Sesshoumarus protection.
Great update :)
Denise (Chapter 81) - Tue 17 Dec 2013
Great update :) I hope she sees Seshoumaru in a different light now.
Ashes (Chapter 82) - Tue 17 Dec 2013
Good job so far.
Lojuba (Chapter 82) - Mon 16 Dec 2013
I love your Story. The last chapter was incredible, it had me in tears. I hope you update soon and I just want to thank you for writing such an incredible story :D
uh oh. no one forces kagome into anything
looking forward into kitsune/sesshy torture. i love torture.
What happpppppeeeeened?!!
Denise (Chapter 80) - Fri 13 Dec 2013
This story is awesome!!!! I think its going to be a bit more easier for Kagome and Sesshoumaru to get along. Great story :)
Haskap (Chapter 53) - Thu 12 Dec 2013
This is quite a different take on writing a fan fiction, and I am enjoying it a lot! It's refreshing, and I adore your take on Kagome as a mother, it's fantastic.
Wow...this last chapter was like O.O OMG!!
! I really enjoyed it a lot!!! keep up the great job!!!!
Noelle (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Dec 2013
This is crazy good!! i nevkno know what to expect and out makes me anxious to have tic wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. Keep writing because I love it. One of my most favorite so far.
I could totally see her fainting coming. Great chapter!
Mimiru (Chapter 80) - Thu 12 Dec 2013
That was SOO kick ass!!
Awesome chapter! I'm glad she wasn't in a forgive and forget type of mood.
Poor kagome she must be both tried both emotional and physically. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope this is not the only reason this story will be MA. *hint* *hint*
abit OC. but I like badass kagome.
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