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Anonymous (Chapter 57) - Tue 30 Jan 2024

Hii!

I hope you're doing well!! I really enjoyed this and I hope you'll come back and finish it. The time jumps are a little confusing but it's interesting to see how it affected the future. I like how multidimensional the characters are and and I can't wait to see where you go with this!


Anonymous (Chapter 57) - Fri 19 Aug 2022

I think I'm gonna give up on this story at this point


Anonymous (Chapter 43) - Thu 18 Aug 2022

Please edit your story you are not connecting your part A story and it is very disconcerting. 

I am one of those people who read your story from the past and I think I very much preferred it the way it was originally

 

The way you edited the story has made it even more confusing because you are not connecting the one in the past properly.
it's jumping all over the place and it doesn't seem to be part of the storyline 


Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Tue 16 Aug 2022

Why did you make only her father Japanese it was always her mother that was Japanese

I both hate and like some of the changes


Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Tue 16 Aug 2022

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 57) - Sat 18 Jul 2020

Nice chapter. 


Betsy (Chapter 44) - Thu 09 Jul 2020

Hey!!! Love this story; second time reading it. I especially love your specificity in adjectives and scenes. 

soooooo I'm going to stick my foot in mouth here: second I've missed the lemon.

is It just implied or am I blind? ???????????????? 


Storm (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Jul 2020

I'm hooked!


SmilingFool (Chapter 56) - Tue 30 Jun 2020

Wow, those two chapters were intense....  I'm glad Kaede made it out but I also hope Kagome doesn't get hurt either...  This chapter is double wow....  I wonder what the book meant that she will kill them all....  I know Kagome wouldn't do anything to harm yokai but what did that eerie message mean and jii-san believe it when Kagome came to the shrine.  Oh the fun of reading update soon.


SmilingFool (Chapter 22) - Wed 08 Apr 2020

WOW.....  I forgot about this story....  I really do like it being my third time reading all the chapters you have posted.  I hoping you will add more... I enjoy reading, my writing is nothing compared to yours and I am a big fan.  Update a new chapter for this story please... Yeah I know I still have like 10 to 15 chapters left before I post another review...  LOL..  :p


Jamie (Chapter 56) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

After finding this story, I must say I am impressed. Dual story lines, separate time periods, keeping it all flowing between both... Not an easy feat, but you have done so wonderfully. I have enjoyed your take on our favorite characters, as well as your additions. I eagerly await your next update, as I do look forward to seeing where you're going with this story. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 56) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Both chapters are great, please update the next chapter quickly!


VS (Chapter 56) - Sun 20 May 2018

Hello,

I'm pretty sure that the book has the prophecy of the Shikon Miko in it! Though I was a bit confused with the reaction of the assistant. The demons so far didn't react this way to the Shikon Miko, she was seen as a hero or savior and less as a killer...

I'm curious to see what exactly her grandpa knows about this matter and if it was a coincidence that Kagome's father wanted them to return to Japan now!

It seems like the two storylines are coming slowly together!

 

I look forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 55) - Fri 18 May 2018

Hello,

I just read your story in two days, and I have to say that I'm impressed!!! I couldn't stop reading :) You are basically telling two storys at the same time, which will be connected in a future chapter. Because you change regularly between modern and past, and have them named as story A and story B I had no problems with following your fic.

When I was reading storyline A I was like "I want to know what happens next, this storyline is the more interesting", and them came a chapter of storyline B and I was just thinking the same :D I just can't decide which one is better...they are both amazing!!!

I LOVE you OC Ryo/Ivan!!! He is an amazing boy/man!

I'm sorry to see that things between Kagome and her father are so tense now, but he really needed to feel (not only see) for himself how good Kagome is in kicking asses! 

Throughout all the chapters there is only one thing I didn't quite understand, and it is this thing with Tenseiga cutting through Kagome's body and reiki and ceating an alternate world...I hope you will explain this theory in another chapter again.

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 54) - Sun 22 Apr 2018

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly! Happy Belated Resurrection Day! Happy Belated Easter!


SmilingFool (Chapter 54) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

OMG....  I love this story...  It took me three days of reading and I like the before and after of Kagome's life and how some of the charaters have a change of OC....  The back and forth kinda threw me off but as I continued to read I have to say that it is a challange to do that and keep in mind where you are at in the story.  I do hope in the future Kagome and Sesshomaru hit it off wouldn't be the same if they kept thinking and not go for it.  Until next time....  Update soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 53) - Sun 11 Mar 2018

Another great chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 52) - Sun 11 Mar 2018

I'm glad your back, its been four years since you updated this story, I hope this year you finish this year. This chapter was great.


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Mar 2018

I know you said there was rape and all, but, I wasn't expecting in the first chapter. Not that I haven't read t in a first chapter before. It's just that it was startling with the after effect and tell near public one. But I got to say you're writing is wonderful.


nicole (Chapter 53) - Fri 02 Mar 2018

Very good story keep up the work update ppl l????????????????


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