this a wonderful and absorbing story. it is unique in the setting and the plot. Everyone is refined with a hidded strength, be it darkness or stubborness. I love you Kagome and your Sesshoumaru is right on target. i even dig your Naraku, he's very in character. I will continue to follow this story. Thanks for such a great read!
jojo661538 (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 May 2011
sigh denial can be such a crippling thing and hes very stubborn anyways keep up the great work i really enjoy reading your great story i hope to read more soon ^_^
Sessh is scaring me :(
yun (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 May 2011
whoaa!! Sooo awesome! :O
please update soon
Ashley (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 May 2011
Cant*
Ashley (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 May 2011
I love love love this story so far. Its refreshing to have a different story plot rather then just the common ones. Also this reads like an actual novel. I would totally by this book. I wait with baited breath for ur next chapter. What will happen? Will Kagome have to show some of her 'skills' will Kouga burn her cover? OOooo i can wait. Keep it up.
Oh no! Run Kagome!
I feel as though Kagome shouldnt be as excepting of Sesshomarus whoring around as she is. I feel like its going in the direction well since everyones doing it its ok. I think Kagome should have a little bit more of a backbone when it comes to himm instead of just giving in all the time. Besides if i was her i would worry about catching a disease when she paid off her debt. I know for the time period whore house were everywhere but i dont think i like one guy in this story. Maybe thats just the femminist in me. But other than that love the sexual tension and everything else!!!!
Alice (Chapter 11) - Sat 07 May 2011
Kouga returns, haha! :)
jojo661538 (Chapter 10) - Fri 06 May 2011
hahahaha hes got it bad....hes jelouse of a piece of paper wow....i really love this story i hope to read more soon ^_^
lol
Sessh is jealous of a paper. Gah, I still adore your story. I enjoy this cat and mouse romances and to be honest, both characters are developed with much care. I, of course, read the Second Journey but this is just as good and just as different. I'm eager to see what other world you can create in the future :)
Oh, and perhaps I should review more so I get more Wall posts :D
I dont know why I didnt read this before! This is amazing! I absolutely adore this Sesshomaru! I want to bite him!
Alice (Chapter 9) - Wed 04 May 2011
Ooh, I'm in love with this story. :)
amy (Chapter 8) - Tue 03 May 2011
I am glad Inuyasha is helping her get the evidence!
Alice (Chapter 8) - Tue 03 May 2011
Love the story!
i love this! cant wait for the next chap!!
Ha! Kagome sure showed him! Loved that part! She was like "Bam! In your face!" Great work!
Oo00o0o0o0... Wow, smo.... you have officially made me want to punch several demons... I love it ^_^ keep up the good work my dear.
ILIA (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Apr 2011
OMG!!!!! This is such a funny and intresting story. I love the fact that Kagome is not some damsel in disstress and can take care of herself and Sesshomaru is even funnier with the payment he wants for his services. Please update soon I love this story.
SEB (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 Apr 2011
This is a great beginning - very compelling and makes the reader crave to continue reading.
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