Everyone is an idiot in here, or at least Sesshomaru. I can understand shielding yourself from getting hurt but assuming the next person you fall in love with will lbe like the last because of something you reveal about yourself is stupid. Kagome's a completly different person, assuming she'll be like his ex is just horrible to judge her like that. At this point i don't even know what he should do besides sleep for twelve hours, take a shower, and then explain! I think Kagome's a smart girl, she could handle it and if he proposed to her instead of making her his mistress she'd be happy to go to him. He makes her any madder though and i suggest she marries Kouga, in no story is Naraku a suitable canidate though it is interesting to think about. Sorry for the long review but I don't like draw out stupidity from my favorite leading man, just makes me want to smack him. Loved this chapter!
Wow! This story is getting really good. The last two chapters were amazing and I can't wait for more. I know that kagome would accept him its not in her nature to judge others because they are different or are poor etc... Can't wait for an update.
Alice (Chapter 21) - Mon 23 May 2011
You update so quickly. :') This is one of my favorite stories here. :3
Aww... poor Sesshomaru. Old memories suck!
julie (Chapter 21) - Mon 23 May 2011
I am begging you to post another chapter today!!!
The cliffy is tantilizing!
Your story has been so intense and amazing i LOVE the constant drama.
BTW. Your ability to post new chapters so quickly makes me so happy.
When im having a bad day your story makes my day better :)
YOUR AWESOME.
Thanks :)
Breezy (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 May 2011
Okay, so I'm completely in love with your story. I love tension and you are wonderful at capturing that feeling. I'm always on the edge of my seat :3
EEeeeeewww! Disgusting! Its so true! Sesshomaru wanted the same thing Naraku wanted! I think Im going to cry *sniff*
Yes he had, but i don't think so anymore. He's much more protective oriented now. That obsessive bug is going to keep him from using her like a one off and not caring at all. I'd of turned him down too, marrying Naraku would be a nightmare. Loved your chapter, though i saw one mistake, you put hurt in the place of heard, but that's the only one i remember.
Aww... repentant Sesshomaru.
*headdesks* I'm not supposed to be THANING Naraku for anything, and yet I find myself wanting to do just that as with telling Sesshomaru his plans for Kagome he seems to have succeeded in pushing the Commissioner over the edge in realizing what he really wants.
*stands in the corner with Sesshomaru's 'beast' cheering him on*
Loved the scene with Rin and Kagome. Hopefully Sesshomaru will manage something so they can experience such joy and freedom together.
Thanks for writing!
moonsofsaturn (Chapter 20) - Mon 23 May 2011
I love how this story is developing, especially Sesshoumaru's conflict with his past. Thanks for updating so frequently, and I look forward to more chapters. :)
jojo661538 (Chapter 20) - Mon 23 May 2011
wow i really enjoyed reading your story its one of my all time favorites keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
Im starting to get worried. I wonder if Kags is going to meet RIn? What if Rin is no longer there?! Oh my!
yun (Chapter 19) - Sun 22 May 2011
lol. "kiss a wet brick'' eh.. xD
update!! iso love this chapter. you're so awesome ><!
Alice (Chapter 19) - Sat 21 May 2011
Oooh, I love how you update so quickly. c:
Before I continue reading this, I have to tell you, you are the only author I've really seen to update so quickly (which is a good thing!). A lot of the times, we're left weeks, months, and even years before an author decides to update a chapter, and you updating means a lot!
I'm completely attached to this fic, and it feels so real and tangible but yet surreal at the same time! So, thank you for caring, and updating quickly, and giving us something to look forward to and enjoy! <3
I almost feel bad for Kouga trying to attack Sesshomaru, it's really pointless. He just burst into that room like he was on fire. I do feel sorry for him, doesn't get that she doesn't want to be some toy that he plays with and spoils. He won't be getting anything more then a cold shoulder from him in the future if he keeps it up. I love this story, please keep updating.
Apples are so tasty.
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