mmm.... apples. ;)
hmm. He's indeed a control freak. tch. >.>
oh well, i just love when it's the other way aound. let Her be on control once in a while too..
update again soon, i can't get enough of this. i soooo anna read more ><!
Oww...I feel for her. Poor Kagome. Sesshomaru is so mean! Hey Smo, Im listening to Rio's soundtrack. Maybe you'll like it too :)
He almost went buckwild on Kouga. very creative of Kagome to find a away to get out there without looking unlady like. Those two are foolish if they think she'll just sit at the house in the morning and not follow them, just saying. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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Here comes the truce!
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Good luck on your finals, mine sucked ( I passed with flying colors, but they sucked!) This chapter was awesome, i liked how they interacted and fought. I think by the end of this Sesshomaru will break and try to get her to fall in love with him. I can't wait to see you update, but please study, grades are important.
Koga is turning sweeter lately. I wonder of that him, or him pretending. And poor Sesshomaru, he's so messed up. Serves him right. :)
I have a sudden image, when Kagome and Sess find Shippo he's going to be in a house--happy--and playing with a young girl. lol After everyone's worried for so long.
KT (Chapter 16) - Wed 18 May 2011
REally!!! Tomorrow morning !!! bites fingernails in anticipation!!!!
Running just makes them chase you! has she no training in doggie habits, oh wait she doesn't know hitting him with a rolled up newspaper would make him behave, lol. Now he knows she's not a helpless virgin he's going to get possessive. Avoiding him will not work on him. Can't wait to see what happens, please update soon!!!
KT (Chapter 15) - Tue 17 May 2011
Interesting O - O The challenge begins. Oh boy you are really good at building up the suspense and I love this genre!!! Wow I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Great work again!!!
yun (Chapter 15) - Tue 17 May 2011
wow!!! i soooo love it! please update soon xD
Alice (Chapter 15) - Tue 17 May 2011
Ooohh, Kagome is getting more bold! :3
Swooning at the moment, ah, Sesshomaru and Kagome have almost slipped into Gone with the Wind for me in this story for me. Or at least an old movie. Loved, loved, loved this chapter, please update soon, i'm chcewing my nails in anticipation.
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Poor Kags! I liked the setting for this chapter :)
ivoryfanged (Chapter 13) - Thu 12 May 2011
Hello!
Just want to let you know how much I ADORE your story <3 to the extent that I'll check for any updates every few hours daily (yes I know you're only human but a girl can hope!). You're a superb writer and I love how three-dimensional your characters are, as well as how your descriptions enable me to play a mini-movie in my head (some scenes actually do make me pant).
Ugh, I have to admit that the suspense and the sexual tension between kags and sesshy is driving me insane *wistful sign* I sure hope they meet again soon! Don't know if I can stand not seeing (or reading, rather) them do that wary dance around each other till Shippou is found >.<
May the fairy of inspiration continue to bless you dear!
<3 ivory
Should he really be out defiling young women when he's got a young girl at home waiting for him to be a proper daddy?Sexy as he is he's still a guy and acting completely jerky. I hope he finds Shippo soon, because as soon as he tries to get up her skirt he'll start feeling wrong about it and might get an attitude adjustment.
Oh, I dont really know what to say. I usally like HIten/Mannen, they're nice characters to use. I think I want to know what Shiyo knows. To be honest I always thought that is was strange Shiyo didnt tell Sessh much about what he thought on the kidnapping. Hmmm...is Shiyo a fox-demon? Is Shippo a fox-demon in this story? Or just a demon?
As always, waiting for another chap :)
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