Oops sorry. I made that rant back at chapter 11. It just makes me crazy, I guess. Didn't mean to go at it again. I love that you can do more than one review here.
Really nice chapter. Sigh, Sessh, you really can be such a freaking jerk. But you have him down pat. I like how you are handling this and progressing it.
Okay, now my little grammar rant. I see this mistake over and over in a lot of fics. There is a misunderstanding of the use of the words bare/bear. You wrote "She would bare his heirs". This means she will strip the or uncover them. To bear a child means to be pregnant with a child. Don't mean to rant and I hope this helps for future use.
Outstanding chapter. Everything is slowly evolving between them. Both are shifting how they view each other. That was pretty a close call. She really needs a crash course on this demon courting stuff. Loved this long luscious chapter.
Sometimes it is just hard to deal with the truth. That was one WOW chapter!
I think I need a tissue...sniffle. That was so sad and so beautifully written. I really like how you have treated all the characters and kept them true So sad for Inuyasha.
that was such an intense chapter. Wow!
Love your story! It is refreshing to see that Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's relationship does not appear over night like a lot of other stories I have read. It is also refreshing that Sesshoumaru's character very on point again, in a lot of other stories they make him this really nice guy out of nowhere. Again thank you for a great story and character protrayals can't wait for the next update
rose (Chapter 21) - Thu 20 Aug 2015
next chapter please
alexis (Chapter 21) - Tue 18 Aug 2015
I couldnt stop reading it and when i saw it had no next chapter i was like whyyyyy!!! Yes it is that good!! I cant wait for the next cgapter to be up. The way you have portrayed makes me see sesshomaru in a different light.. Keep up the amazing work you are doing!!!
Koree (Chapter 21) - Sat 15 Aug 2015
Inuyashaaa :/ this is sad . Kouga is an idiot on his way to his death , amazing chap :)
Please update it as soon as you can
SangoKitty (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Aug 2015
im loving this fanfic sooo much!Great job!
Kouga does need to be knocked down a peg or two. Just because you are a big fish in a little pond does not mean you are a big fish anywhere else. Kouga will shortly get what is coming to him wether Kagome approves or not. Perhaps Kagome needs to find out from Kouga himself that he plans on having multiple mates and that she will only be one of several...... Even though she never wanted to be his mate in the first place, it will certaintly raise her hackles, so to speak! If Sesshomaru doesn't kill him, I hope that Kouga will realize (after Sess gets finished with him of course,) that Sesshomaru is not like Inuyasha at all. He won't play around with him and he will kill him if he keeps coming around and calling Kagome "his woman" like he did to Inuyasha. I cannot wait to read about this encounter!!!!!!
hm... Maybe Sesshomaru will gift Kagome with the life of her friend? It's a long shot... and likely depends on how Kouga talks and behaves upon coming across the pair.
Sesshomau has a lot of work to go in earning Kagome's good graces. Affections can come after.
Thanks so much for writing.
I really loved this chapter. I think they have gone through a whole range of emotions. Thanks so much.
Wow oh wow!! that was a roller coaster for the emotions. I'm so glad he was able to revive Miroku and Sango. Whew! I liked the way it ended with Sessh reflecting on his situation. Sigh...my romantic side needed that. Really great chapter. Cheers!
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