Good first chapter! Cant wait for the next one, ima be supporting you all the way, so be on the lookout cause I might review every chapter ;]
Well then, I can't wait for hell ^^ I wonder what Kagome will do now?
Also, aren't all of them individually indebted to Sesshoumaru, so he can get a favour out of all of them, and not just Kagome? He can also use it to his advantage, after all, the worth of a life is hard to define; they basically owe their existence from that point onwards to Sesshomaru... I see potential for intense drama and plenty of humour! *evil grin*
Great work! The writing was easy to follow and generally had a smooth flow.