I'm so in love with this story and I can not wait to read the next chapter. I'm a busy mother and my only down time is when I'm laying in bed reading and so far this story is the only one that can keep me up well past my bed time. Please update soon!
First off, I'd like to say how much I love this story. The relationships are credible, and the rate of growth between Sesshomaru and Kagome's especially is much more believable and realistic than most fanfics out there. For that, I thank you. I felt like crying when I read all the drama about Inuyasha, and how he and Kagome said goodbye! This was truly an amazing read. You're a great writer... to the extent that you put my own works to shame. Haha anyways, I'd also like to address your Japanese.
Don't get me wrong, I am not Japanese. But am I wrong when I say that you are using Google Translate for your Japanese? Well, most of it? Like 'jerk,' for instance? I can tell because most of the time, Google Translate just romanizes the English word. Like, 'star' is 'suta,' and 'ice' is 'aisu,' And, of course, 'jerk' would be 'jaku' because it is hard to use the 'r' with an Asian accent. I would know, actually, because I speak another Asian language fluently. Just pointing out the whole vocab thing because I thought it was funny...
Anyhoo, my rambling stops here! I know you get many reviews for this story (you must), but I hope you've read mine because it's not a simple "good, please update soon" like so many others. And now, because I have nothing else to say...
Good, please update soon! :D
Ciao,
Stardust Miko
REDWOLF (Chapter 22) - Thu 19 Nov 2015
Seems like Sesshoumaru has a lot to work out as well! Great Chapter!
Manatee (Chapter 22) - Thu 19 Nov 2015
There is no better day than strolling onto Dokuga and finding you have updated this fic. Thank you! It is always a pleasure and a joy to read it. You have a wonderful way with sexual tension! Love it!
OMS amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
more please
Leaora (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2015
He just demanded that Kagome court him. I died right then. My lungs deflated and the spirit left my body. Thank you for this moment! I am going to savour it before continuing to the next chapter.
snow (Chapter 22) - Sat 14 Nov 2015
OK i see sesshoumaru is in love with her in his own twisted way. but still he threatens to rape her, he does not open up to her, she has to force some way to see a better side to him and he gives hardly any. his personality issues, and her complete and utter stupidity are annoying as a modern woman she wouldn't be such a push over even if she is in the past just because the mark or not. she has always been independent and stubborn yes naive but to an extent and her naivety is to the fact she was just a child when she fell through to the past. she is older now and more mature to an extent i concur with that but still she gives in to sesshoumaru to easily and he does as he pleases. she could still explain to him if he pisses her off as he is she can easily make herself infertile till she deems him worthy enough. hell don't say shit go to home do it and come back and just be like dude chill i wont have any babies for as long as I see fit i made sure of it if you want me you better help yourself by trying at least to get me to want to be with you and have children with you. she could easily just go to the village later and close off her mind no thinking nothing and jump in the well and go get shit done. hell even if he is there in her time she can go to the doctors in her time and get shit done he cant do anything to change that it will force him to actually try a different approach then try to force himself on her. idk i just don't like forceful people if you don't try at least then there is no use in a relationship a person who continues to be with someone like that is delusional that isn't love never will be. this relationship has started bad its not going to go well if he is this way. if its about strong future pups taking that away will force them both to actually try to work on other things if sesshoumaru is still trying even with her not having kids she can see maybe he has feelings for her and they can actually work on it. but he is so distant and non communicative.
now for the structure of the story. even thou i don't like his personality it is more realistic he has always been a closed off person in the Anime and manga to an extent. the story is well structured and very well written. it does give another look at inuyasha and his demon blood and why demons and humans hate half-breeds so much. i do pity inuyasha though its a horrible life this story kinda makes me wish inuyasha can become a full blooded demon and be with kagome it makes me feel he deserves her more so then sesshoumaru ever will.
character development is well done as i said before sesshoumaru needs some personality work lol xD
how sango and miroku died and now there fear of inuyasha is understandable and well put in the story some writers fail to see if someone you trusted betrayed you and killed or tried to kill you, yea you will feel hostile towards that person don't matter if they lose control of there blood or not.
Yes, an update! This chapter cut a bit more into Sesshomaru's developing feelings and his conflict over having them which was a treat in and of itself. Another great chapter!
So good! Can't wait for the next one!
Well Dayam! That was an amazing chapter! Lots and lots going on and Kouga finally gets it through his thick skull! Thanks for the great update.
Yay an update! You did a great job with this chapter. It flows seamlessly with the rest of the story and it suits it well! I hope you update again soon!!
Leticia (Chapter 22) - Fri 13 Nov 2015
That is definitely how i believe Sesshomaru would react to developing feelings for Kagome, i am glad that they are finally going down that road but i hate how he keeps on saying that it's an obligation. Anyways i am so glad that you finally updated the story and i do love how the chapter turned out cant wait until the next one.
Loved it
Saiya (Chapter 22) - Fri 13 Nov 2015
Aahh Poor Kagome.
snow (Chapter 5) - Fri 13 Nov 2015
grr so far sessomaru disgusts me and kagome stupidity as well she can easily just make herself unable to ever bare his children/pups if she actually wasnt stupid.. but she lets him in to fast to quickly get away with shit and that no normal person would do.
Ankita (Chapter 22) - Fri 13 Nov 2015
<3 _<3 pleaseee pleaseee updateee sooonnnn
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