I am really enjoying the reasoning and concequences of the existence of hanyou. It makes it so much more realistic as to why its so hated on both sides and his constant lack of control!

Good story

Woop woop, at last a bit less angsty! :) I so want the continuation  some day (and I want Kagomes answer to Rins question about Sesshomaru laying on top of Kagome to be an insult against Sess, like "Yes, he fell and used me as a pillow to soften his fall, tell me Rin is he always this clumsy?" And then later Sesshomaru could use it against Kagome later *floats away in my fantasy of Sesshomaru flustering Kagome with a comment in a sexual situation*)... Hem, anywho.. Would love the rest of the story. :)

Made it through all that for the story to be abandoned. That makes me sad. ???? 

Everyone finds a great fanfiction that they love to read, this one for sure being one of them!

Sadly, it also falls into the category of never being updated U-U.......

Please update soon!

Please no threesomes x_X

I really like your story but should I wait to continue reading after I have read chapter 7? I see that you are in process of editing this story and was wondering if I should wait or if I can continue to read 

Really sad this was never finished :-(

really loving the story so far and looking forward to seeing how it goes in future chapters. please post soon

noooo, you have to update! Don't leave me like this! This story is so awesome and captivating. I love how in character Sesshomaru is and how he is slowly changing. This is amazing. Please update soon!

Please continue. I really have enjoyed it so far. I've read before and just reread It again. I need juicy lemons to sate my hunger urrrrrggghhh

Interesting, although I think it's a bit odd that Shippou knows so much about the youkai/miko breeding thing, especially considering how young he is.  The explanation is good, but the delivery of the idea could have been better.  If Shippou had relayed what he'd known and or heard of from a youkai legend about it, I would have found it more believable.  It just ties the idea to canon, with it being exceptionally rare, and gives Shippou credit for knowing so much. 

There could be lore about it too.

Perhaps from an ancient youkai temple or settlement as well.  The idea while well explained, does make me understand why Sesshy would want, Kagome.  It just doesn't convince me that it's either possible or has been done in the past.  Since from how Shippou explains it, there would have to be preceding examples, and or living youkai born from such unions.  Otherwise I doubt he would have known so much, especially about the youki overwhelming a miko's reiki part.

If he'd been unsure of some things.

I think I would have been more intrigued rather than thought it odd.

pooooor Inuyasha ....

Better written story than before, I love your edited story :)

Please update whenever you can. Thanks and have good day Rinku

p.s. : For correction, it's haori, not hoari

This is so well written, its a work of art. I have really enjoyed re-reading some of the chapters and love how the dynamics are evolving between the two. Have been following for ages and will continue to look out for updates. 

Amazing work! 

The story is nice ,full ) of action but it's being dragging for what 6 years?..  are you ever going to end this one e????

The story is nice ,full ) of action but it's being dragging for what 6 years?..  are you ever going to end this one e????

i wanted to finish this, the idea was so good the start amazing then... i am sorry but i will give up. kagome is not kagome, sesshoumaru is mary sue in my opinion mathematic? please, rumiko said herself he is not inteligent and that sort of mathematic in that time? for one who believes in sword resolving of problem? nope it wasn't and poor inuyasha? no comment here. i dont get why many authors have to humilite or make him suffer for kagome to go to sesshy. they are being demon rasist in my opinion evry being has the rifgt to live, please dont take offence i dont want to be rude or sadden you i am just telling my honest opinion. 

kagome is weak willed and so he kissed her once and she goes woo?like seriously?you pointed and we know she loves inu so no, she is not herself, kagome i know will fight to the end a 21 century woman will, and why cant she read his thoughts too? wasnt that to get to know EACH OTHER?

and i see no spark/emotion from him at all like nix nada zero, does he really want her? lust isnt the sole reason for mating. but maybe that was your intention and you will show later?

on other note divide their pov in diferent paragraphs when kagome is thinking and him, i do this myself, thats why i noticed, and i noticed you use too instead of to often, he was going to bla bla. sorry if i am being hash  i am giving advice i am sort of critique that means well even though i am come as harsh the fic has lots of potential, you write very well, i enjoyed it till now, but the flow changed and i dont seem to recieve the same satisfaction at reading. please forgive me good luck with evrything and again dont take offence i mean well.

good story! Please update soon

Yes keep it coming!