Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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Ang (Chapter 17) - Sat 14 Jul 2012

OMG this was an amazing story. I was waiting for this update for what feels like forever. Can't wait to read the next one...hopefully soon. :D


Nyuka (Chapter 17) - Thu 12 Jul 2012

It is acceptable....hehe get it because the last unacceptable ^-^ hehe laugh with me heheeh.... I love Kagome's attempt a spear making that was too funny.  I'm glad you threw in that horrible (what was a snake?) demon.  Open Kagome's eyes a little further to the reality of her situation.

I find Inuyasha's fate to be a terrible one and that fact that Sesshomaru is so...well Sesshomaru to be urk some if you catch me drift.  The fact that Inuyasha turned into a Daiyoukai is still bothering me.  I know this is going to be Sess/Kag and would dare try and change that fact but I still fill pity for Inuyasha as I often end up feeling here on Dokuga, but if I had to deside how he would die it would be honorably while Killing Naraku or saving his friends ^-^

 

I love how the story continues to progress and I prase your author abilities, Keep writing and I'll keep reading

 

Nyuka ^-^


smcandy (Chapter 17) - Thu 28 Jun 2012

Pretty damn good. I like to see an even match for Sesshomaru to fight over. Another splendid chapter my friend keep it up. Update again ASAP.

 

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy


Laura (Chapter 17) - Sun 24 Jun 2012

I think it is progressing well. I have really enjoyed this story, I'm kind of hoping for a big white knight momen now. I can't wait!


hkyadte (Chapter 17) - Sun 24 Jun 2012
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Jenna (Chapter 3) - Tue 19 Jun 2012

D:

Never thought of rules like this, but these rules due actually work for the animals of our world. It even applies to humans through the Darwin Awards.

If someone does something so insanely stupid and survives they are made impossible to have children. It's fact.


Jenna (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Jun 2012

hahahahaha! What timing?! It was just awesome for that to happen! XD

Though I think you made Kagome a little too defenseless during the fight.


Manatee (Chapter 17) - Mon 18 Jun 2012

Your writing pulls so much emotion from me when I read!  I ache in my chest, get nervous, excited, happy, anything and everything.  I can't wait (as usual) for your next update.  Thank you so much for this newest installment and for continuinging with this story, so many of us love it!


The Four Tailed Fox (Chapter 17) - Mon 18 Jun 2012

I would definitely say it's progressing well enough. Can't wait for the next installment! ? ? ?


Endarkened Glory (Chapter 17) - Sun 17 Jun 2012

This story is truly a satisfying read. I implore you, please post more!


Smortz (Chapter 17) - Sat 16 Jun 2012

:O Dear lord, I want more! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.

 

.... Just saying, Rinku.... When you have the time that is..... 

 

@_@ I shall be waiting... lurking in the shadows for an update. 

 

~Smo


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 17) - Sat 16 Jun 2012

I'm glad you updated I have not heard from you in a long time, please update soon.


Allie (Chapter 17) - Sat 16 Jun 2012

OH MY GOODNESS PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOON!!!!!


InuLover (Chapter 8) - Sat 16 Jun 2012

I'm really enjoying your story, but I have one question.  Why do you keep referring to Sesshoumaru's hand as a "claw"??  He has a hand with 5 fingers with claws, not just 1 big "claw"!!  


Emma (Chapter 17) - Sat 16 Jun 2012

Omg best story ever <3


Mikazuki (Chapter 17) - Fri 15 Jun 2012

I love this story...the only thing I would change is...more frequent updates.  However, the time in between gives me the opportunity to re-read the story.  

 

I realize Kagome is still reeling from what is going on and is having to accept what is taking place, she seems to be way too much of a whimp.  This last chapter was awesome though, and I like how Sesshomaru appeared out of nowhere at the end of the chapter, supposedly just in time to stop the unthinkable from happening.  Makes me wonder why the other demon didn't sense him there.  hehe...hope he gets what is coming to him.

 

Please update again soon???  ^.^


REDWOLF (Chapter 17) - Fri 15 Jun 2012

This is coming along fantastic......I just wish Sesshoumaru would show more love, hopefully this will do it :)


Scherherazade (Chapter 17) - Fri 15 Jun 2012

The chapter is well written and exciting.  But I think I'm going to have to reread the entire story to fully appreciate it.


Alexandra (Chapter 17) - Fri 15 Jun 2012

Amazing!!! I really loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more! I think Sesshoumaru should have been their eairlier. He's cutting it a bit too close.


Ditto Princess (Chapter 16) - Thu 19 Apr 2012

Wow this was intense and WOW amazing!!! I love this story!!! Absolutely love it!!!

~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess


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