I really want to finish this story but your portrayal of Kagome is so naive and ignorant. She is a intelligent woman from the 21st century and yet you have her acting klutzy and idiotic. I've read a lot of stories over the years and I can not understand why he wants her in this one. She is utterly juvenile and I hate it because this story has such promise...
:0 what is kagome to say!? I really luv every chapter of this story ....thanks for the continued posts(: update soon please! oh, & Happy Valentine's Day ^^
What took him so long?
Is Miroku dead? Is Sesshoumaru going to get him?!
Saiya (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016
hahaHahahahaha That was Awsome Poor Kagome she Almost Pissed herSelf.
Oh my....Giggling!! Wow! Such a lovely long chapter! Thanks so much. Well worth the wait. Cheers!
I thought he didn't have his other arm back yet? How did he stop the car?
Love this story. It gets better and better each chapter.
REDWOLF (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016
OH, I can't wait for Jaken to get Kagome's wrath!!! Jaken is a pest. Sesshoumaru...well he won't even know what hit his behind...LOL!
So could he use the debt to make her mate him if she says no at the end of the courting period? That seems kinda slimy.
Lorena (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016
Now, I admit to sometimes wanting to choke Sesshomaru sometimes, but I'm rooting for him right now! I'm glad they haven't crossed that lemon line because the understanding of each other hasn't even grazed friendship, and I worry that it'll cause more harm then good. It seems like Kagome will have to be the first to accept this and help Sesshomaru realize the potentially beautiful relationship... but who knows~ I'm eager to read what you have planned for these two
KairaB (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016
I think you should have Kagome plant new trees when she gets to the Western palace so that Bokuseno can keep watch over them and fully reconcile the tension between the Western family and Bokuseno. Great story so far. Please, keep up the good work.^^
Ankita (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016
Loved this chapter <3 please update moreeee moreee moreeee and sooon sooon soooonnnnn
I don't think insulting Inuyasha is going to win her over...
Please post another chapter I want to read what happens next
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