Phew! That was just intense and oh so sad! Really Kags?? He tore Sanho apart. Who knows of she is going to recover. Seesh saves your butt and you are mad at him. Time for a reality check there little girl. I'm thinking a small part of Yasha wanted Sessh to kill him. And where is poor Miroku? Really good chapter. Thanks. 

love the story,its just what makes the story weird is that Shippo knows all this at such a young age.

Yuuuusssss finally all caught up! I started reading this fic for what seems to be ages ago. I remember really enjoying it. I had long since forgotten that I had placed it as one of my favourites. I was thrilled to see you'd updated. I can't believe I had fallen behind  like I did. It appears you've added Koga into the mix. Oh this is going to be good and full of drama. Sesshomaru is such a conundrum. He is capable of decency  (at times) and can be such a right bastard most other times. I absolutely love that about the way you portray him. I've very much enjoyed the back story to this. In so many fics the reason for Sesshomaru wanting Kagome is either typically hormone or beast related. He simply up and decided one day he wanted to claim the miko for his own or he wanted to piss off Inuyasha. The dilemma involving Inuyasha's rapidly weakening and tainted blood makes for great character development as well as giving the plot depth. It's not some usual I just gotta have her because she's hot lol. This is very well thought out. 

Wow, this has been a real nail biter. Poor Kags and what has happened to Sango and Miroku. Not looking good. Okay, quick critique: you bear a child, not bare a child. Bare means to strip down, make naked or take off the outer covering of a thing(Bare his chest). A woman bears a baby (past tense is bore or had borne). English is a tricky ass language and many words have dual meanings and similar spellings. I notice this mistake made over and over by young writers of fan fiction. They don't seen to teach grammar anymore in school or they let it slide. Okay, stepping down from the grammar stand now. 

Oh holy crap, he slapped her! Nice touch! I must be dreadful for applauding him for doing it ha ha. I absolutely adore his darker side. He can be such an ass. 

I died @ "What is this contraption on your breast?" Ha ha ha lololololol. I'm catching up. Whew...what a sizzling hot as all hell chapter! 

That was a wonderful chapter. Right now, unless something really drastic happens between them, I don't see Kags giving in to Sessh. She has too much animosity towards him. Sessh is going to have to really charm her and learn to bend a little. Love the visual of him in the courtyard attacking the falling leaves. That was very nice. 

Hmmm very intriguing! I think Shippo and Kirara are just SOOOO cute!!

Holy crap! holy crap! Damn you for interupting, Inuyasha! I love you but GEEZ!

Sesshy is so cute when he is protecting Kags! I love it! I also love how Kagome is fighting. The characters are growing and developing. Loving it! Unfortunately, I have to go study now. I shall return later, though!!!

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Heh I absolutely love Sesshy's reaction to the TV show! I also love the reaction to his lips! Yummy!

Wow oh WOW! That was quite the chapter. Have u said Thank You for these lovely long chapters? They real late very nice. Okay I need a shower now... Grins. Cheers!

HAHA! I am really loving Sesshy's subtle little ways of saying he cares for Kags. I also like how you have made Inuyasha in this story. Yes the situation is still sad but atleast he isn't an evil guy or cheating on Kags with Kikyo. Maybe the Shikon wish can still be to make him demon or human!

Whew! He saved her silly self. Shippo is thinking hard. He is so clever, I'm sure whatever is nagging him will come to light. I love this sharp little kit. Great chapter. Thanks so much  

Oh no! Kags running is never a good thing. Another great chapter. So surprised the girls didn't come to sneak a peek after all. 

Welcome to the modern world Sessh. Really nice chapter. I cannot imagine what all our modern gadgets would look like to someone from the past. Poor girl, she's trying to fight it but  Mr charming is going to make it tough. 

I really like how you have handled the demon law but damn...poor Yasha. You would think he would be able to find a way to live with that demon blood as it grows stronger. Oh boy, Sessh in modern Tokyo! Talk about overwhelming your senses. I was assigned in Seoul for a year, it was almost too much. It took me a few weeks to get used to the crowds and constant noise. In the states, we live out in the country. I get twitchy when there are too many people around and I can't do malls or shopping. Too many people. I can relate. Great chapter. Thanks so much. 

LMAO about peeing under stress. We used to have to do that in the military and someone has to watch. Geez it could take forever even with a full bladder. That has to be the most creative marking ceremony I've read yet! Very cool.  Although the string bonding thing is a bit like the Twilight wolf binding. Nice chapter. 

First off - I LOVE Shippo - he and Kirara are mytwo favorite characters besides Kags and Sesshy. Just so cute and fluffy! The way you are portraying Shippo is sooooo cute I can barely stand it! Love it!

Secondly - HAHAH Inuyasha's in for it! That's what he gets for doing that to her!

Thirdly - I wish you had described those dreams?!?!