I would love to read more. Update asap please.
I noticed something at chapter 16... but I doubted myself. Other than the rabbit she caught, Kagome has made no real attempt to eat since she was in the future... she has got to be some kind of hungry... she didnt even get to eat the rabbit.. its no wonder she is tired all of the time...
I hope she gets to take shippo with her to the west. Oh and I thought it was so funny she was thinking of random crap to annoy him. I was thinking towards the beginning of the story if I had this link I would annoy the crap out of him... I would think-sing the "I know a song that gets on everybodys nerves" song... and maybe "Its a small world afterall"(my dad hates that one... lol)... She should definitely think more stuff about her period and cramps... just gross him out stuff... so much potential here...
I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the length of the chapters and the story development pace. The limes are good and just enough to keep the story legit. KUDOS! On the edge of my seat for the next update!
Anonymous (Chapter 19) - Sat 22 Feb 2014
I hate Sesshoumaru. With him, it's one step forward, two steps back. For one so old it's unfitting to convince himself again and again that he has no feelings and doesn't need feelings and blah. He even contradicts himself as he already admitted to Kagome that she is more than a breeder to him in one of the first chapters (the chapter where he "surprised" her in her bedroom). No feelings? As if anger, disgust, disdain, boredom and arrogance weren't emotions. Freud would shake his head about him. Poor Kagome. I hope that she stays strong and keeps refusing him. It just wouldn't be in character for her to fall in love with someone who doesn't love her in return. I also hope that Sesshoumaru can learn. Yes, he is very in character, indeed. But it would be so frustrating if he continued being such a prick :( In the last chapters the story seems to go round in circles a bit. There is very little character development ...
Loren (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Jan 2014
Wow, this chapter was uploaded a year ago.. I hope you're going to continue it.
So well writen, it will be a shame to leave it as it is :(
Please have some marcy on us and keep it coming! Iwas really enjoying reading it..
Ana (Chapter 19) - Sun 08 Dec 2013
Please update please please pleeeeease *-*
Moemoe (Chapter 19) - Mon 04 Nov 2013
ahhh neeed more O.O
Please don't abandon this fic!!!
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