Reviews for The Second Journey by Smortz

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Tenshii7 (Chapter 31) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

I can't belive it is already finished!! I am really looking forward ro the sequeal!! I loved reading this story and I can't wait for more to come. Keep up the great work!!


Nyuka (Chapter 30) - Mon 04 Apr 2011

EEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!   They are mated they are mated....and Inuyasha's mate got her punishment and there was bromance....Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! love it love it love it!!!!  And and and and and the bad guys are dead....so, uuuuu whats next do we get to see Kagome in the future in 500 years or is there some other things that we need to see....like what was that thing that saved Kagome when she died.....and maybe Kagome saving some of her family members so she would be born......or saving Japan from joining Hitlar and the bombing from america....or maybe just avoiding the bombed places.....or maybe .... I don't know...... but I'm ramaling again....great story........Nyuka


Nyuka (Chapter 29) - Sun 03 Apr 2011

Awww that is just soooooooooooooo CUTE  L-O-R-D  S-E-S-S-H-O-U-M-A-R-U    that is just adorable!  I mean you think that he would be supprized that she said his name first but no has to have is said properly...hehe  I don't recognics the George guy from history...not that I know two much about it so does that mean all of that was meant to happen?  Thats interesting no?  alrighty great story what is to come next I wonder....Nyuka


lara (Chapter 29) - Sun 03 Apr 2011

I love your story. I'm confused about a few things so I'll ask later. I'm looking forward to what/where/when & how Kagome & Sessh mate. I also wanted to ask about when Nami & Kags were training there were 3 things Izanami said that Kagome had to learn to control with her goddess power & in the story she mentioned only 2:

1) How to telepathically move &/or lift heavy objects (but it was unclear ,as it was never specifically stated if the size,shape or weight of whatever she moved was of importance & that as Izanami was only training her for the 1st time to use this power,she only used a heavy object & that possibly in time or eventually as Kagome became accustomed to her powers it left the matter open to whether this new power Kagome had attained would eventually become 2nd nature & she'd be able to move anything no matter the size or weight of the object???)

2) The next thing she was showing Kagome how to do was how to change her appearance & voice or as they say,to shapeshift or how to appear as anyone at anytime (once again this was left unclear if it was an ability she could use anytime as Nami used it to become or appear as the one eyed seer or if she could use it regularly to alter her own appearance at will as Nami seemed to do when she'd suddenly appear with her hair,face & dress freshly done...I'd love to know if it is something Kagome is supposed to be practicing regularly?????)

I loved this chapter but,boy do I have questions...


crin_fausta (Chapter 29) - Sun 03 Apr 2011

Sorry for not being able to review the last chapters...my internet connection was cut...again...

I love the way you outline the interaction between Hazuki and Sesshoumaru: "Sesshoumaru growled angrily. He leaned down and grabbed the toddler's shoulders. “L-o-r-d S-e-s-s-h-o-u-m-a-r-u!” He said slowly. She yanked on his tail once more. “Shomu!”" It's...you had me in tears for laughing so much at the last part...

 


lara (Chapter 28) - Sat 02 Apr 2011

this chapter was great but it just felt so short for some reason.I can't wait for the next chapter. I only wish you would tll us if once  the Gregori died when his men saw him were they able to tell he was not a man but a monster & that they had been killing innocent people & beings for a man that truly was a DEMON,did most stop fightiing & watch Kagome,a small slip of a girl,disarm him & then with her own body pick him up & toss him before Sessh beheaded him.


JeniNeji (Chapter 28) - Sat 02 Apr 2011

Lol

 

Good chapter. Nice battle desriptions :)


KEdakumi (Chapter 28) - Sat 02 Apr 2011

Good chapter.  I love the idea that she had to know the leader's name. :)  Will they find out what inspired the mole rat did all that?  (Just wondering)   Can't wait for the next update!


Nyuka (Chapter 27) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

YAY! Kagome died....and came back to life thanks to some mojo juice from momma....and now they are going to finaly mate.....and the enemy has holy guns.....and ....and I'm hyperventalating....Great update....I'm glad that you do..update that is ...XD Until next time .... I think Momma has some explaining to do...

 

Nyuka


lara (Chapter 27) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

I'm sorry I'm baffled. I'm very confused.Wasn't Inuyasha needed in this fight? I thought Kagome was going to make Kiyoko pay for her crime & she'd said with blood. I'm very confused.I'm sorry the last 2 days I was busy. Please get in touch I've had some medical emergencies...

I enjoyed this but I'm confused that "Future Man" wasn't at the batttle ? I do hope this wasn't the last chapter as you said in the A.N

I look forward to an update


Lady Lyris (Chapter 27) - Thu 31 Mar 2011

I went to go for the next chapter and made a face that probably looked like this >:'( or -__- 

You are such a great writer, and every chapter is filled with something awesome! Was that ambrosia that he fed Kagome when she died? I can't wait until you post another chapter. 

 


Miss.Undo (Chapter 27) - Thu 31 Mar 2011

oh man thats too cute! finally, there going to be together!


Nyuka (Chapter 26) - Thu 31 Mar 2011

Yay for Sesssy torture....lol......personaly I think he went to go kill some things...hehe....I'm not liking Inuyasha choice of mate, whats her problem anyways?  It's almost like she was possessed by Kikyo, she doesn't know Kagome enough to be so jealous of her.  I never like girls that acted like that in movies and books.  Jealousy is so stupid, if you don't think someone is loyal to you and it bothers you, just leave them, done, end of story, no more drama.  I can't comprehened the dewling of such emotions.  Sure everyone gets envious and jealous its only human but to let yourself act upon such emotions is retarded...........phew.... okay sorry for the ramble ...love your story.

 

Nyuka


Nyuka (Chapter 25) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

hahahahahahaa....get it out! get it out!....heheheheh......that is just too great, that would be a terrible weakness in battle if it really crippled sesshomaru like that ....lol...thank you for updateing look forward to seeing if how Kagome and Sesshomaru's trip went....XD....Nyuka


lara (Chapter 25) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

This chapter was great.I hate Tatsuya.I'm glad Isamu sent water type demons to check out the waterways & his idea paid off as his scouts had sent a scroll stating sightings in the east of the enemy ('future man') & he had his reinforcements already.They were nearby,yet it had just been a week & his ship was repaired & he already had his reinforcements.

 I'm glad Toran let the cat (heehee) out of bag about the 2 week limit being abolished for Kagome & Sessh to Mate. As when Sessh & Kagome were alone she asked him if he still wanted to mate her & he said yes. It was then that she initiated contact  for the 1st time & kissed him. Then later Akemi admitted to overhearing from the gossip in the castle that the enemy was near & that Sessh & Kagome were no longer intended & Sessh came in & stated "That is not true,I plan on taking Kagome as my Mate."

I am now nervous over the upcoming battle & when it will happen. I have many questions . I'll just say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter &  what will happen next with: Sessh & Kagome,the enemy & his reinforcements & when & where they'll attack, Kiyoko & how she'll be punished,Tatsuya & what will happen to him,where's Suzaku,what'll happen to Ryuichi & many more questions.

I'll just have to try to patient as I wait for the next chapter. I love this story. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


crin_fausta (Chapter 25) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

You had me laughing with tears when Hazuki decided to bite Sesshoumaru's tail. It was fantastic...not to mention Kagome proving how intelligent she is...and then the moment between Sesshoumaru and Kagome...*sigh*....it was as if written for me....

I am very addicted to your story, you know that, don't you?*grin*


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 25) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

Awww poor Sesshoumaru!  That couldn't have felt good at all!  I guess it serves him right from keeping the courting thing from her, he? 

Loved the chapter, all the military intrigue is great :D  Keep up the wonderful work!


Blaire (Chapter 25) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

I love how you left the chapter on a funny note :) Can't wait for the next one!


KEdakumi (Chapter 25) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

Too funny.  I keep picturing my son with white fur in his little mouth.  Hey... Lord Fuzzy yelps.  That's probably the first time I've read of him making that sound. :P

Can't wait for more!


Ceysna (Chapter 25) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

OMG!!! I think I broke something! *feels ribs* yea... I think I broke a rib... poor sess!! LOL Hazuki is like Nommy tail!! mmmm Hot Dog!! X^D Omg I loved this Chap!!! I can't wait for the next update Smo! They only get better! I donno how you do it, but your story just keeps getting better.

Please, please oh please oh PLEASE keep up the GREAT work!


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