Reviews for The Second Journey by Smortz

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crin_fausta (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

You are amazing to being able to keep up with the school work as well as being able to update! Good luck!

I totally enjoyed how you described the fight scene and Kagome's emotions, not to mention Shippo fighting for Kagome...It was fantastic!

 

 

 


CandIcane (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

This is my first review that I have ever left on this site..... All I can say is FANTASTIC! I cannot wait for you to add more I literally jump and down when I see you have added some more. Love the story and all the character interactions. Her eyes are amazing, and her new role in the fate for all deamons. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. Keep up the amazing story... :)


AzulFire (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

heyz this is sesshomaru?!..SQEEE btw i decided to change my name anyways AWESOME chapter i love fight scenes so yeah...I WUV KAGOMES EYES tey r so pretty just like sesshomaru ^.^ i love the our territory comment, and how sesshy was thinking she is amazing an all that things are finally starting to get a little romantic between sess and kag eh? WHY DID U HURT MY FAV DRAGON TT-TT h-he *sob* wont die will he W-WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA no offense i think it was necessary to show readers how weak the dragons r getting witout the egg and all B-BUT STILL i am sad for my wittle dragon BUT SESSHOMARU WILL ALLWAYS BE BETTER THAN ANY DEMON ALIVE YOU HEAR ME DONT YA FORGET IT NEVER MWAHAHAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAAHHA AZUL IS OUT PEACE DAWGS and dog demons kukuku...


crin_fausta (Chapter 13) - Wed 16 Mar 2011

I REALLY, REALLY enjoy this story...You always keep me on the edge..Kagome the the protector of demons, the Guardian it's just wow..but if you think about it it's the most logical thing to happen taking into account the Jewel...I can't believe I never ever thought about it...You really are amazing and creative!

Sesshoumaru being drunk...hmm..It would be such a sight to behold..too bad that I can never see it....*laugh*

I  loved Shippo's reaction and Kagome's display of power...You truly are talented!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

 

 


jojo661538 (Chapter 13) - Wed 16 Mar 2011

wow will the dragon be kagomes companion once it finally hatches? will kagome get some other abilities other than sight ? anyways great work i really like this story keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


Sesshomaru?!..SQEEEE (Chapter 13) - Tue 15 Mar 2011

DAWWWWW little shippos being so fierce YUSH :3 THANK YOU for considering making sesshomaru drunk but i dont see where that would fit in the story, your such a good writer you describe thing in such detail without making the descriptions tedious to read, i love kaggerz eyes but i dont see why that is somthing to get shocked about? wellz whatever  OOOH and i love it when sesshy gets nervous when he was talkin to kagome about bein her protecter an such LOLZ TWAS KAWAII DESUUUU x1000 at least to me I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR IT IS AWESOME... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i wonder how kagome gona fit in at sesshy castle HMMMMM.... >.> <.< ^.^ lolz BYE BYE


LadySmurf (Chapter 13) - Tue 15 Mar 2011

I absolutely looooooove this story!! I cannot wait to read what happenes next, though I do wish that the dragon was more involved and his history was more readily known.... But I cannot tell you how much I enjoy this story!!!!!!!!!LOVE <3 :D


Ceysna (Chapter 13) - Tue 15 Mar 2011

*super happy squeal* YOU USED IT!!!! GUARDIAN OF THE EGG AND PROTECTOR OF DEMONS!!! *happy dance* Omg you are the BEST!! GREATEST!!! most epically amazing, awsome author-writer-person-thingy EVER!!! Very moving chapter. Never saw her as being the Mother of the Egg, or Ryukotsuseias being the daddy, O-o TOTALLY did not see that one coming. Ew... ANYWAY!! Awesome update! I love how you made Kags eyes!!! X^D PRETTY-FULL!!!!! (can you tell I really liked this chap? or that I'm excited about your story?)


Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one!!! PLEASE keep up the GREAT work!


lara (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

okay where the heck did Sessh & the dragon go to???  You hadn't mentioned the dragon in a while & you didn't mention Shippo since you said Kagome sat between Shippo & Sessh at the feast. I imagine that Sessh &/or the dragon sensed the priestess...& I'm guessing the  being with the 2 toned eyes is the Immortal Priestess??? & she wants to talk to Kagome...but does she want to speak to her in front of the whole village in the middle of the archery field or is she going to ask to Kagome (&her friends) to go somewhere to talk... I have a feeling that they'll like each other if Kagome said she felt a familiarity upon seeing her....unless she's the seer.

Please update soon 


Ceysna (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

*me in us, jaw in china* OMG!!! 8^O She came out of hiding?!? Where'd Sesshy go!?! Grab the weapons!! He's drink was spiked!! >-< Crepes Kags is alone!! Oh man I gotta know what happens next!! peas? carrots? mashed potatoes? sushi? Sesshy plushie?!?! Oh I can't wait for the next update!! You evil, EVIL writer you! lol


soulNchantress (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

Another impressive chapter!  I'm sorry I haven't been leaving alot of reviews lately.  I have been reading when I get the time because honestly, I hang on every word of this story.

Just wanted to jot a quick note to tell you that I am still reading and loving every word!  Keep going please.

I'll try to leave a better review next time.  I gotta dash!  GOOD JOB!


Sesshomaru?!..SQEEEE (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

GAHHH I LOVE CLIFF HANGERS...but i despise them too... plz update soon ALSO i would LOVE to see sesshy drunk that would be hilarious....btw where did sesshy go WHERE IS HE *hyperventilating* ok back to seriousness anyways great chapter cant wait 4 another one lol i love the way kagz talk to the monk guy it was flattering but devious at the same time PURE EVILNESS ILOVE EVILNESS MWAHAHAHAHAHA so um... keep writing u is AWESOME btw jus sayin.........MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


Tenshii7 (Chapter 12) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

Love Love Love your story. I really like the ending of the last chapter and can't wait to find out what kind of other twists you put in the story. I also like how the plot isn't along the lines of rest of the stories you normally read. Keep up the good work!!


lara (Chapter 11) - Sun 13 Mar 2011

This was great but I want more


Ceysna (Chapter 11) - Sun 13 Mar 2011

NOOOOO!!!! No wiping out of demons!!! I hope they find the egg in time!! O.o with more than 30 secs to spare? >_< Ok I'll stop... I wonder though... Is Kags gonna become the "guardian of the Egg" now too? Leader of the Demons of Japan? I donno!!! You must tell me in the chaps to come! Please update and keep up the GREAT work!

 

And good luck on your report on the music concert!


SESSHOMARU?!...SQEE (Chapter 11) - Sun 13 Mar 2011

heyz i think this was a great chapter i loved how you make kagz and sesshys relationship start out slow unlike other stories ive read where sesshy automaticaly falls for kagome its a great story so far  and i cant wait for more chapters soo.... keep writing your a good author also....I LOVE WHEN KAGZ HUGGED SESSHY IT WAS SOOOO KAWAII SQEEEEE I LITERLY SCREAMED IT  WAS SOOOOO CUTE LOLZ im a crazy sesshomaru fangirl sooooo....always remember to....DONT JUDGE OTHERS BY THEIR CRAZINESS MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


crin_fausta (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Mar 2011

I really appreciate it that you update so quickly! (It is a quite hard thing to do...taking into consideration that you also have a real life....)

By the way...I would give anything to see Sesshoumaru as a "glow stick" wagging his tail! *laughing*

Yayyy.....I can see already the sparks flying between Sesshoumaru and Kagome..*sight*. I love the fact that you pay so much attention to every detail when portraying the develpment of their relationship...It's breathtaking...(not that you don't know that already :p)

You never cease to amaze you know...the battle was really convincing, not to mention the description of the cave...What I really like is how you explained the extinction of youkai in Europe, the explanation was really credible...You can easily make a connection to the Spanish Inquisition...Wonderfull!

 


lara (Chapter 9) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

That chapter was odd,the end was hysterical....I could picture Sessh & Kagome looking at the dragon & Shippo for their opinion on who killed the gorilla demon if the arrow hit first or was his head taken off first. I could also picture the dragon mumbling 'her arrow did hit first' & Shippo nodding in agreement.  ...I was only worried that the gorilla going after Kagome after she'd just questioned people at 2 homes  about the dragon egg caravan....& found out the second group (most likely the theives) were the one with a couple of monks,a priestess & a strong looking demon who said he was a fortune teller...he did a few reading & gave the little girl a sash...& when they went to the little girls home she said the 2 monks & the priestess wouldn't talk  she said the 'they were mean'  ...the little girl seemed to refer to the demon as the future man.....Hmmm after a month the smell wasn't in the village but was in the air & the village rested between 2 mountains on either side...if their smell is in the air could that mean the dragon egg thieves were hiding out somewhere higher up on one of the mountains.... when Lord Tatsuya gave Kagome the egg shell to wear so it would help her to locate the egg itself.he'd said the piece of the egg shell around her neck would heat up when she was near the egg but  I forgot what Lord Tatsuya had said about how close to the egg she had to be for the piece of the shell around her neck to react...       

The dragon youkai's were odd, if I was Kagome I wouldn't know what to think....that better than everyone attitude they show especially when it comes to humans.....how could any being think they are better or deserve more respect than any other being. I could see as Sessh could be looked at as a spoiled being,looking down on everyone.One could only imagine growing up having a father that was powerful & feared,,,,aside from the fact that he knew he'd been born powerful....the fact he was born extremely attractive & probably had females of all types throwing themselves at him just for the opportunity to get a glance of him naked,or a chance to touch him, most probably would do anything to have him use their body even for just a quick rut...growing up that must have done wonders for his ego..having woman all but throw themselves at him...he peobably never had to ask or look for a willing female & he probably wouldn't know what to do if a woman came along that he wanted & he had to make the 1st move (if he finally finds the one he wants,if she's untouched then she'll immediately assume he only wants a quick rut & has probably never been turned down,so if she's untouched & has no interest in giving her virginity to a hottie just to be tossed aside...I wonder what his reaction would be to hear that she plans on giving her body to only one being in her life & until she finds the one that willing to have only her & will love & respect her,,,she'd rather spend her life without knowing the touch of a man)Sessh being an heir & then a Lord has probably always been given whatever he wanted without having to earn, prove or work for anything.

I can't wait for the next chapter

I can't wait to read the next chapter...I'm such an eager beaver


Ceysna (Chapter 9) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

*gapes* he was sulking?!?! Thats... so.... CUTE!!!! Go Kags!!! Kick Bad Demon Butt!!! That was too cute, arguing over who killed the evil monkey. (and I know it wasn't a monkey!) Thanks for the update! looking forward to the next one! Keep up the great work!


crin_fausta (Chapter 9) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

You never cease to amaze me! I love the way you build up the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome, I can see the fireworks already...Go Kagome! Don't give up!

You should put humor to at the genre...you had me laughing with tears at the end of the chapter..The scene was priceless!

Please feed my addiction!

 


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