Reviews for The Second Journey by Smortz

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soulNchantress (Chapter 17) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

I wouldn't have asked if I could touch it.  I would have done it anyway...it would be worth losing a hand over. LOL  The funniest was the short and sweet 'NO' she got in reply.  I could see that scene so clearly. :-)


KEdakumi (Chapter 17) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

Loved the begining of the chapter... but the "Can I touch it?"  "No."  Had me snort.  I could so see Kagome clasping her hands together and giving the puppy eyes with that question. :P

 

Can't wait to see what the baby gets into.  Is it a girl?  Sometimes the munchkin was referred to has a he, so I just want to be sure... or maybe I read it wrong. (been a long day)  I can just see a little toddler running around the castle, hiding Uncle Sessez furry tail from him, or outright refusing to sleep without it. After all, every baby needs a blankie. XD  *Picturing little toddler, thumb in mouth, hugging Sesshoumaru's fur as she and Sess glare at each other in a tug-of-war with it*

Can't wait for the next chapter!


lara (Chapter 17) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

this was a good chapter but I'm confused about the egg hatching & you didn't tell us what the hatchling looked like,it's mother was human & if the egg is no more than does that change Kagome's role???


CandIcane (Chapter 17) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

(A.K.A. Candace Heck) After I finished my happy dance when I saw you added new chapters; I read them and I'm sad to say I finished them way to fast and I'm now again waiting for more :(. Awesome awesome awesome again! Cannot wait to read more....


Tammy (Chapter 17) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

I just found this one today and could not stop reading it!  It is well written and very entertaining!  I will definitely keep up with this one.


Ceysna (Chapter 16) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

*snickers* no Kags, if you did... don't you think you would have last time??

OMG I love your story!!! *cackles* the godmother was awesome! *rubs chin* /:^) I wonder if/how Kag'll find out about Sesshy's Tail.... *grins* oh I can't WAIT to read about that part.... Does he purr like a kitten if she rubs it just right? or does hit leg twitch if you scratch it? ....ok shutting up...

 

Thanks for the update!! X^D please keep up your amazing awesomeness with the updating and the GREAT work!!!


lara (Chapter 16) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

you updated again...that's what I get for not paying attention!!

I liked this chapter.It gave some insight into Sessh's childhood & one reason why/how he uses his unemotional mask.  So his mom is alive & his god-mother is a void demon?? whenever I picture void demons I think of Kanna,but she's not a true void demon is she??? she's an incarnate of Naraku,a being made from Naraku's cast off youkai after he's done remaking his newest (in his crazy mind) most perfect form....he's so vain...even when he tried to get rid of Onigumo's heart & he tore out the part of himself that contained the heart of Onigumo,the part he tore out had no face or identity & wasn't happy till it found a face he felt was the most physically attractive.


crin_fausta (Chapter 16) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

"Kagome blinked at him innocently. “Do I have to shout out something too?”" Awesome...Then...the lesson, Gin , I am impressed!

Waiting for the next chapter...


Rin (Chapter 16) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

XD A Godmother for Sesshoumau?  Nice, I like her.

Woot! about time Kagome leared close quarters combat! 

I love how you make her ask silly questions and make offhand comment like that!

I'm looking forward to the updates <3


soulNchantress (Chapter 16) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

LOL I HOPE Kagome isn't like Inuyasha.  Can you see her roaming around the counryside screaming attacks at innocent trees?! ROFL  I know that in the anime, Sesshomaru says his "Dragon Strike" attack, but he barely says it.  He doesn't scream it at the top of his lungs.  Inuyasha thinks that the louder he gets, the more wind he puts into the Wind Scar!!  Inuyasha's an idiot! LOL

Yup!!  This story is STILL excellent!  I'm so Un-surprised.  I knew this story was good from chapter 1.  Keep up the GREAT work!!


chevonne knowles (Chapter 15) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

I just have to tell you that your story is fabulous.

I am hooked. I try to read it three chapters at a time but

It is so goood that i can't wait that long!


Miss.Undo (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011
I love it, you updated like every day!You deserve an award for best updater lol please keep it up. ")

Ceysna (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

*falls over laughing* "that sneaky dog!" if only she knew... Omg, GREAT chap, I loved it! Thanks for the update!! *taps chin thoughtfully, eyes glinting* hmmm... she DOES have demonic energy as well now... as well as a longer lifespan... >:^) maybe she CAN give birth to FULL blooded demon children.... after all... you DID hint at it earlier...

 

X^D please update more!! And congrats with the tests!!!


Rin (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

So far I have to say I'm enthralled with the story. You set a captivating tale, and I find the flow of it very nice.

I'm seeing mixed signals that could become a pet peeve of mine, but I'm going to watch and see where your hints lean more towards before I ask or make a comment on it and start pouting.

Your OC's seem well characterized and I love how you blended them so naturally into the story.

Shippo's character makes me smile. <3 He's a growing young boy, who Loves and tries to take care of his surrogate mother.

He does seem to fade into the background a lot more then I think you mean him to, at least from how I'm reading it. (which really could just be me)

Thats all I think I wanted to comment on so far. I'm excited for more, but school is always a priority. So no pressure on speeding up posting the next chapters <3


AzulFire (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

GAAAHHHH I KNEW IT i knew their would be in awkward situation in sesshys castle! ^.^ and it happened lolz hmmmm is sesshy starting to fall for kagome HMMMMMNNN probaly anyways im glad my wittle dragon is not dead TT_TT BUT TIS STILL SAD, SESSHOMARU SMILED ?!?!?!?! AND NO ONE WAS ABOUT TO DIE?!?!? DAWWWWW HOW CUTE dog demons must have awesome hair...BUT SESSYS HAIR WILL ALWAYS BE THE GREATEST...even im jealous >_> MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA and great story btw i wuv how its coming along YOU COULD WRITE A BOOK LOLZ seriously your an awesome writer AZUL IS OUT PEACE DAWGZ 


KEdakumi (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

HEHE... Just like a man, can't win the arugement with a woman? Then avoid it!  Another great chapter!


crin_fausta (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

“I cannot produce full blooded heirs with her,” Sesshoumaru's voice was filled with annoyance." I truly enjoyed the way you highlighted Sesshomaru's angst..it had me laughing with tears...

I think I fell in love with the new character: “She is powerful, beautiful, smart, and the most important,” Isamu said the last word with a wide smirk, “available.” 

Yooooohoooo....did I tell you how much I enjoyed Kagome in this chapter when trying to talk the servants into letting her work than that discussion with Sesshoumaru evaded the argument...Bloody fantastic!

I am dying to see what happens next....

 


lara (Chapter 15) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

I loved this one ...it was hysterical...but you didn't tell us if Ryuichi woke up & saw Kagome or if she was able to help him even a little


lara (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

I remember in the begininning there was only 2 monks,1 priestesses & a large demon that was considered a fortune teller with the dragon egg thieves. I can't help but wonder if Kagome changed in any ways other that her eyes?? did her hair get longer or did she get any markings?? are we going to find out more about her powers & what does Shippo have to say since his last outburst of not letting her take on another quest that leaves her alone,lonely & forgotten...She's immortal now & some kind of powerful Miko + youkai...Shippo has to be wondering if she'll be around so long now..she could never mate a human...what would happen if she mated a youkai &  what youkai would be powerful enough of her??? poor Shippo worrying about his mom...he should talk to Sessh & find out his opinion..Sessh was there with the Immortal priestess before she gave Kagome her powers but Shippo was there when Kagome saw the seer

I can't wait for the next chapter..... 


lara (Chapter 13) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

I'm dying to know what is going to happen now   & boy is Shippo angry...I have so many  questions now


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