I think you did a really good job ^_^ This is an interesting stance to take. Usually in fanfics, it's Kagome who is opening Sesshoumaru's eyes to what love is, not the other way around. I think you did a good job changing things up.
I particularly liked the last line. It tied everything up nicely. It was unusual for him to be so open...and slightly poetic...with what he thought her love would be like. That being said, I think he has the capacity to understand and express something that's of sentimental nature, especially given the circumstance of the story and that he was in love once before. It was definitely surprising though. If I were in Kagome's spot, I'd definitely be blushing too, hehe.
Ihope their upcoming interactions will be in support of this chapter. Since it had some heavier emotions in it, it seems like this chapter will be a good jumping off point for them to start getting to know each other on a deeper level. Prior to this chapter, their interactions have been amicable, respectful, teasing at times...and very funny, hehe. Now, thanks to this encounter, perhaps they can start seeing in each other what everyone else has been seeing and trying to push them into. Table has been set, now let us feast on some delicious gooey love stuff ^_^ hehe
Keep up the good work!
Anna (Chapter 84) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
Don't agonzie over the chapter, it was beautiful.
karasu (Chapter 84) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
How cute! He is really nice to her!
Nyuka (Chapter 84) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
You can't seem my face but I'll tell you that I've got his big goofy grin on my face.....Poor Kagome if only she knew what she was yipping at Sesshomaru she would die of embarassment before she could be killed by inu-papa's youki....XP....I wonder why Sesshomaru hasn't confronted her on the subject, he obviously knows she not saying what she thinks she is saking so why doesn't he tell her? Though I guess telling her could be pretty embarassing in of itself...hehe.....love you story...Nyuka
lauren (Chapter 84) - Sun 27 Feb 2011
Wonderful! I love the way you've brought Sesshoumaru to fall for Kagome, and I love how Kag is being tricked to talk dirty! I wonder--will she ever find out? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Lytari
Loveyaa (Chapter 84) - Sun 27 Feb 2011
I enjoyed the chapter. You can tell that you put a lot of work and thought into it and I think it comes across beautifully. I think its very sweet and a nice segway to Sesshoumaru realizing his feelings, but I wonder how ur going to get Kagome to realize her's. and in enough time before she succumbs to The dog demon spirit inside her. I can't wait to see what happens next in the game of everyone's influence :)
rm (Chapter 84) - Sun 27 Feb 2011
One word:
daaaaaaaaaaammmnn!
That was sweet.
Aw, very touching, who thought Sesshomaru could be so in touch with his feelings. hehe, if he's being suffocated then get him an oxygen mask and tank to him stat.
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