This was a very poignant chapter.  I could feel the turmoil in Sesshoumaru and dawning realization of how much Kagome has affected his life and the lives of those around him.  Very nicely done.  Keep up the good work!  

O_O Is she going to wake up? Or is she going to die or is therr soemthing dramatic..poor kid...poor everyone. gah. When I saw the last chapter i was all Oh no and  now I still am  gah. *ramble-y* <- don't mind me. >.< Can't wait to see what happens.

Aww poor everybody. Everyone is on pins and needles waiting to see what will become of the little miko. I wonder what will happen when she wakes up. I could have sworn that it has been more than a day but either way she has made quite the impression. I wonder what will happen to her even if her and Sesshoumaru fall in love and fufill why InuTashio came back. Won't she still have him stuck in her head and dying? and then making the problem worse with Sesshoumaru and love. Regardless I can't wait to see what happens next :)

*glares* How could write so little this time! I'm bouncing on the edge of my seat here waiting for Kagome to wake up! Hmmm....maybe glares aren't your thing. Do you accept bribes? I can make some mean cookies.....

Don't whistle innocently at me, this s pure evil, their short and erratic in their coming. Now i probably have to wait till tomorrow to see if theirs any hope of her waking up now.

Poor worried Sesshomaru, perverted as well for wanting her to talk dirty to him willingly. Rescue her and she'll be completely blown away.

Oh no, not yet! He hasn't even got truly tortured yet, just teased, don't die Kagome!

aww, this is so cute and sad. And well after the last chapter very appropriate. It reminds me of the phrase "you don't know what you lost till it's gone," and Sesshoumaru it starting to realize that (i know Kag's isn't gone, but oh! when something is wrong, it feels like she is.) I love this story and the character portrayals. Oh! LOVES

Eventually he'll catch on.  It's not really his fault that males are much denser about relationship changes than women... ;)

But now I'm worried about Kagome!  If her body is in such dire straits, there can't be much Sesshoumaru can do anyways.

Awww, how sweet. 

Innocent author??? OH, PULEEZE!!!! You are too wicked for words to leave me hanging like this! I swear you must be taking lessons from Forthright!

my Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

O_O

FIXIT!!!

*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT GOSH I WISH CHAPTERS WERE LONGER....THIS IS SO JUICY

don't kill kagome off!! i understand the whistle innocently bit but don't kill her off!! she's an essential part of the story! hope all works out and can't wait for more!!

Ree you evil woman!

WHAT HAPPENED!?!??!?!?!!?

*dies a little inside and gets down on knees to beg you to update*

is the pool of blood a side effect? anyways keep up the great work and congratulations in another great set of chapters i hope you update soon ^_^

Nuuu!! You musn't leave off there!! It's not nice at all!!

Ahhhh! I hope you're planning on updating soon becuase that chapter really left me wanting more! Poor Kagome! 

Wahhh!!! ::Runs around in circles:: I'm at the edge of my seat here...really!  Cliffhangers are great when you are the one writing them, but they are utterly nerve-wracking when someone else does!  Great job, and I, of course, look forward to the next installment with GREAT anticipation ;)

She's dying. :(