Really nice chapter! Yeah! Shippo! Really loved their reunion. I like that you have addressed something most don't, several wives for political alliances. This would be normal during that period. I like Honoria's character. I'm glad they aren't all scheming harpies. So sad for her position. Sigh, only one more chapter to go.
Another really nice chapter. I like the easy nature of their bonding over personal stories. I am loving Kanga. I have a soft spot for Tengu (have you ever read The Heavenward Path? It's delightful, there are two slim novels). Can't wait to see him in action. Alright here's my moan. You wrote 'in all intensive purposes his future wives.' That phrase should be 'for all intents and purposes'. It does tend to get run together. Lovely chapter and Thank You!
Very satisfying chapter! Putting down a snotty Ryo and being tended too by Sessh. Just delightful. And because I am a spelling and grammar nazi, it's reins when talking about a horses bridle, not reigns, which means to rule.
I like the way you did that. Gone us the present action and then go back in time to bring us back to it. Hmm confusing sentence, but I think you know what I mean. Again, you did a good job with the fight scene. Just think of it like dancing, with swords. I also like the conflicting emotions of our major characters. Cheers!
Oh I missed reviewing this chapter. Yeah Kagome, took matters into her own hands. keep up the good work. cheers!
Such a fun chapter. I enjoyed it very much. You have his character down very well As well as Kagome's. I will most likely finish this today.
Loved, Loved, LOVED this chapter! Okay, I'm a horse owner and a huge fan of Pat Parelli and Buck Branahan! You don't manhandle a horse, you become their partner and leader! Turning her back and walking away usually sparks their curiosity and they will follow you. Approaching face on is what a predator would do. Okay enough! You did an awesome job on the horse whispering. Cheers!
Oh, that was a really lovely chapter. You know my favorite part of the 2nd Karate Kid movie was the tea ceremony. It was so elegant. I hope one day to participate in one. She has shaken him to his core. Very nice. Cheers!
That was wonderful. Of course, we all knew that Kagome and Rin would be wonderful together. Loved the chapter and your attention to detail. It brings the story to life. I understand the want for more dialogue but I really enjoy all the loving details you include. Thanks for that. Cheers!
Another really lovely chapter. I like all the details you include. It's makes for a lovely mental image. Thanks do much for this delightful story.
Wahoo! That was awesome! I love how you built it up And how Kagome befriended the demoness and then stood up to him bristling with indignation! Brought a smile and a giggle! Nicely done! Cheers!
Really nice long chapter. Lots of great info. Oh, even though this is 4 years down the road, congrats on your baby! Always a wonderful miracle. I liked how you have put together a wonderful story and still keep it canon. I only have one grinch, sorry in advance, it's a grammar thing. You wrote: 'Kagome's silent baring of her injuries', that should be bearing. Baring means to uncover or make naked or something to that effect. To bear means to endure or to carry like bearing a burden or a child. That has to be the most common spelling error I see in fan fictions. So not just you. Great story, I am loving it. Cheers!
I think you did a wonderful job with that scene. I liked the void demons and how you had them regenerate. That was very inventive and a new one for me. I also liked how you had them working in sync during the battle. Very good chapter. Just read up on battle scenes and you will figure it out!
Goodbyes are always so sad but new adventures await! Very nice chapter. Nice moment with Yasha. How could you not love those ears? Cheers!
Really nice chapter and fun! So she was able to subjugate him without the beads. Too funny. Poor Yasha, his life has just changed drastically. Very nice wandering through Sessh's garden with Rin and his reflections.
Short but nicely put together. You needed a segue to the next part. I'm guessing in this fic that she is not from the future? Or is she and we don't know it yet? Cheers!
Short but nicely put together. You needed a segue to the next part. I'm guessing in this fic that she is not from the future? Or is she and we don't know it yet? Cheers!
Oh I like how you have started this story. I am hooked and want to see where it goes. Cheers!
Love the story. Though I'm surprised that kagome is still willing to be intimate with sesshoumaru knowing that she would have to share him with four other wives.
Kira (Chapter 18) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
Hello,
I absolutely love this fic! I wonder what's going to be Sesshomaru's reaction to his mothers garden. Will that finally show him how much a truly loves Kagome? Also, wondering when the shikon will come into play. I mean so far she has done great in keeping her duty to herself but I can assume it gets lonely.
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