I've been reading this non stop, keep it up k?

my favourite parts were when Kagome and Rin interacted, or Kagome and Ryu interacted.

I love the humour too, such as in this chapter when Kango stared at Sesshoumaru who looked as if he hadn't just askedd him to try and sleep with his potential wives.

I love Kagome's coyness and how she doesn't fall for Sesshoumaru within a couple of chapters. I hate romance that happens to quick, it needs at least 10 chapters and you executed that perfectly. It enourages me with my Sess/Kag greatly, but you need to update now to allow that to continue!

Please carry this on and don't give up on it, it truly is amazing and kept me captivated.

so far so good.  :D

moving on.  

Wonderfully written. The flow is absolutly beautiful. There's no need to worry about lack of dialgoue. Congrats on motherhood and I look forward to your next update.

This is a really engaging tale. While sometimes you use a word that rhymes with the one you mean (i.e. 'caddy' instead of 'catty') and don't conjugate the verbs properly (i.e. 'masters' instead of 'mastered' etc.) the story is of such complexity and the tone and voice of the characters so developed that it detracts from the enjoyment of it not at all!

It is refreshing to see Kagome as a warrior who can hold her own, and a grown woman in charge of her temper for the most part. Sesshoumaru is rendered especially well, as is Inuyasha. Your original characters have a life of their own and fit perfectly within the world. The void monsters that require the talents of both to defeat - again, exciting to have a new villian, one who is not Naraku, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with that.

Congratulations on your wins in the awards! They were well deserved. And don't worry so much about your update schedule. Many authors have taken longer, and with less justification.

Can't wait to see what you do with Shippo, since you have done Rin so well!

-ThereIsWarInWomenToo

librephillic@yahoo.com

I have read this story probably 5 times. I love it. The characters are so skillfully complete. They have a life of their own. I got to the last chapter, again, and wanted to see more. I know what it's like to have a little one, so I can only imagine have 2 kids around and trying to do something like write. I truly hope you can find the time to get another chapter for us, your loyal readers.

I appreciate the great story and effort put into your writing.
Huggles

Alpine ^_^

Hello!

Can you please please update? I really hope to find out what happens next. I have been checking up on this story several times every week ever since your last update.

I really really like this story. So please update? =)

I think this is my favorite AU sess/kag story.  I'm dying to know more about this new character that your adding to the mix.  Keep up the great work, and I hope to find a new update from you soon-  Euphoric Sorrow

Just sat down and read the entire thing in one night - Love it!  Hope you update soon!

Yay!~

Good chapter, Shippo is coming! How exciting is that? I chuckle softly to myself about all the other potential wives all demanding extra blankets and warm milk.

I really like Seishin, he's an amazing creature!

Oh, I've reached the end. / : (   I can't wait to read more!  Really compelling stuff.

Wonderful story! I just can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship progresses, and I am thoroughly looking forward to Kanga's seduction of our fair miko! And Shippo!! Are we to expect any visits from Sango, Miroku or Kouga anytime soon? 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!!!

Lytari

I wonder, have you seen the movie One Night with the King? Your plot thus far greatly reminds me of it. I must say I am thoroughly enjoying myself with this story.

Booyaka! Shippou!! *happy dances*

As for Kanga... I'm guessing he has to be super HOTT. *laughs* If he's supposed to be there to tempt women away from SESSHOMARU. *fans self* So this should be interesting. I'm particularly looking forward to his testing of Sesshomaru's feelings and loyalties. ^_^ I can hardly wait. ^_^ Perhaps I should ask now that Kagome not purify him too bad if he makes an inappropriate advance? *laughs* But then again... she's used to Miroku so she'd probably just slap him -maybe with a miko enhancement to get through his tough demon pain threshold- then laugh and walk away. So many possibilities. ^_^ teehee.

Speaking of teehees... I wonder how much of what she learned Padmaja will not be able to keep to herself from the other maids?

Thanks so much for writing!

I don't know why I waited until there was a new chapter before reviewing this chapter as I both really liked it and had some ideas of what I wanted to say. Mostly that I loved how Sesshomaru gave Kagome her gift as well as the gift itself. Total win. Sure... perhaps he could have been more suave about how it was presented... but honestly the way things were right at this moment I would not have been surprised if it took quite some time for him to figure out when and how to do it in a way with which he was satisfied. This way was perfect in its serendipity and simplicity. It showed how thoroughly he thought on her present in relation to her and even his not-to-be-admitted insecurities in how to get it. Bonus that now Sesshomaru won't be continuing to stress himself out thinking about what to do. At least on that matter.

Of course... ending with such a sweet embrace is total love. ^_^

Thanks so much for writing!

YAY! Shippou! I'm glad he showed up. Also that kagome wanted to trust Sesshoumaru with her secret. The moment with Padmaja was cute.  XD Can't wait for the next chapter, and to find out mmre of Kaagome's story. Ooo and people reations to Shippou. :D

I just started reading this story a few days ago... normally I avoid AU stories but since this one was well written I kept reading and have really enjoyed it! 

Can't wait for the next chapter when Shippou makes his appearance, bet everyone will be surprised to find out that her adopted son is a demon.

One thing: I would have thought that, having found that Rin was Sesshoumaru's ward, the bridal candidates would have kissed up to her a little more in order to get his favor; after all, he did have an entire picnic to introduce her... I would think that at least some of those bridezillas would have picked up that she was precious to him and tried to use it to their advantage.  Ryo did risk her life to try to save her, but for the most part seems irritated by her.  Not saying that I think you should change your plot or anything like that, just an observation. 

Thanks for sharing!!

R

Yay! Kanga's here~ Now to stir up some trouble. I am kind of annoyed that his arrival disrupted Kagome and Sesshomaru's conversation. >< They should have walked slower.

Hmm... Maybe the crow can get that annoying, clingy bitch Ryo evicted from the house sooner than later. She seems the type to cling to anyone that has money/title. Cheating on Sessho-chan would completely negate that savior fit she had.

Well, great chapter. I'm looking forward to some Kanga-time in the next few chapters. Maybe some more Inuyasha and Shippo too?

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

grats on ur wins!  this chapter was extremely delightful, and a nice change to the heaviness of the prior two.  Kanga sounds like a doll.  can't wait to see more of him!

YAY SHIPPO!

Can't wait to read about that cute ball of fluffffff <3

I only saw one thing that I'm not even sure I know how to fix...

“What did you and lord gorgeous speak about when we were all so obviously shewed (shoo’ed?) along?”

Anyhoo I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREE! This story is amazinnnngg